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for a baby

by anonymousgurl

schedule February 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Pure smut, but that’s okay on an adult fan fiction site; in fact, it’s to be expected.  What is unexpected is how poorly this is written!  Poor dialogue, worse descriptions, little sense of feelings or emotions from either character, and a title and teaser that have little to do with the ‘story’.  Most disappointing but of FanFic I’ve read on this site.

person jack
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What is this all about only one chaptet and it doesnt have anything to do with a baby hurry up and release another chapter
person Arwen_Evenstar
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... erm, talk about quick and hard!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story hope you wite more can't wait until Molly finds out about the baby since the title is A Baby. but the fun part will be hen Ron finds out

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