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for Unexpected Desire

by BinxBolling

person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens! That line about her running of a cliff like a lemming made me laugh aloud. Please update soon, and thank you for reviewing my story, as well.
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An extremely promising beginning. I'm impressed with that incantation you wrote, it was very rhythmic. I hope that you update soon!
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I would love to read some more.