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for Unexpected Desire

by BinxBolling

schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story; all the ingredients are coming together now - drama, romance, tragedy - and fabulous writing.

And you give me Severus dancing, which always makes me so happy (especially when wearing super-hot Slytherin dress robes). I'd give anything to see one of Flitwick's pumpkins with graveyard scenes carved on it!

Excellent stuff; I'm so glad you're keeping this going.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh really interesting i hope you wright more soon
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Order don't know what to make of Constance, do they? I'm so glad she gave Sirius a hard time; he is my least favourite canon character, so it always cheers me up when he gets a bloody nose.

The poor girl is in quite a bind; I hope Voldemort doesn't get wind of her, but somehow I'm sure he will.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Constance kicked Sirius's ass. I've been waiting for someone to do that for quite sometime. I loved that line about Goddamn wizards and their goddamn ancient magic. Hilarious. Love the story so far; please update soon.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Constance is a feisty one, isn't she? Snape needs to watch his back...literally.

A Hallowe'en Dance will be good - I've always had a peculiar fascination with the idea of Snape dancing.

I loved your chapter title - so true, lol.
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape? Reading Little Women? Yes! Oh that made me laugh out loud.

Bleh. I hate the 'golden trio.' Stupid brats will only interfere with Severus and Constance.

Love the story and please update soon!
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that has made my day! The image of Snape waiting impatiently outside the ladies' changing rooms in Marks & Sparks....classic!

Ugh at McDonalds though...I'd credited him with more taste. He's so sensitive, though, isn't he, considering Constance's 'womanly requirements'. LOL.

I like a slow-build with plenty of detail and scene-setting, so don't worry about flinging lemons in right away. I'm getting more & more into this.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the poem; I haven't heard of Michael Lally before.

Severus is being quite sweet in this, isn't he? I wonder what he's going to make of shopping in Muggle London?
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Very intriguing. She has quite a mouth on her, as does Snape. When he let out that string of explicatives, I couldn't help but giggle. And the spanking! Oh gods, how I love spanking. Please update soon.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting premise. I'm wondering how Constance is going to have to save Snape.

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