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for Princes in Exile

by Marti

schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chapter. Poor Hermione/Mina ... I'm sure she is feeling betrayed by and out of step with Severus. They had created their own world where they both fit in perfectly, where she felt safe and now he's changed it by becoming the Professor again. Why is it that men have no concept of how completely destroyed women are by being raped and more so with an added beating! He should reflect back at how upset he himself was at having to become the 'bat of the dungeons', someone that his own daughters didn't recognize in personality. That is less than a grain of sand to what Hermione is going through.

Waiting patiently for the next chapter:)
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you back! I hope that your son is recovering, and that your RL calms down. Your story is still great, and I look forward to your next update.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering what had happened to you. I hope everything is okay with your son and all. Thanks for taking the time to post another chapter, it was well worth the wait! Loking forward to the next one! Thanks and God bless!
Grace
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update when you can.
person doodle
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled to see that you had updated. I wanted to cry reading Percy's destruction of Hermione. Very well done. Good luck with life.
person Grace52373
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back Marti! Sorry I didn't review earlier, I've been really busy at work this month! Great chapter as always! I am looking forward to seeing how Hermione's day went, and I too am curious about where Jenn will be sorted! I am also curious to see if her friendship with Abraxus will go anywhere, or if he was permanetly scared off by Serverus! Funny though, I thought she would meet Scorpious, you sure surprised all of us with Abraxus! I am also wondering who their stalker is, and if he is still after them. I also enjoy the scenes with the twins, Emily, and Serenity! They are adorable! I also applaud your choice of name for S/H's oldest, but I could be biased since Jennifer is my name too! Lastly, I hope Jennifer and the girls don't judge their dad too harshly for his past, what matters is that he atoned for his mistakes. I am looking forward to another chapter, and I do hope your son is getting better! Oh and sorry about the nitpicking over a few mistakes in my last review. I really love this story and a few mistakes don't really matter
person mekareami
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very pleased to see an update! I hope your son stays healthy and your muse is feeling prolific :) Thank you for writing and I eagerly await the next installment.
person lokilani
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
better and bettercan't wait for more
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always glad to see you posting again;) Severus should keep some of those heads around and claim them to be former students! lol A second, post-war son named for Luci's dad seems just about right. Good move. But, lordie, all the different names within the Snape/Prince/Granger/Weasley family might be confusing to the little girls. They'll wonder who they're supposed to be!
person LisaJean
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back Marti!! Hope real life has calmed down for you some. Loved the update, look forward to more. Can't wait to see if Jenn is a Slytherin or a Ravenclaw.