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wow ... that was great i love it and the lemon ... so they are going to go in an trip ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

I like it. Please update soon.

excellent chapter! poor toby :( i wish that percy wasn't dead so i could bloody well kill him. grrr.

Oh my, dear Jenna, poor Severus and Hermione. Interesting game of wizard's chess there my friend! PW

You did a wonderful job with the conversation between Hermione,Severus and Jenna, I am very impressed and absolutely adored the way you showed them as a family and Jennas reaction. I look forward to reading more of your story, I do hope though that the Weasley won't get any claim over Jenna. Now that she knows about them she migth want to get to know them somewhat, but it should be her and her parents choise, nobody elses.
I also hope, of course, that if Jenne leaves for Hogwarths, also the rest of her family will follow:-)
One would have thougth that even the most hotheaded Weasley would play it low in regards to Jenna considering that the Weasley who is her biological father was a DeathEater and raped Hermione, some of them must have some hounor?

Ch.2 -- Only two chapters!!! But I'm addicted already!! I do understand allotted time for writing. But, the story is soooo good so far!

i hope jean will still call him father when she find out more of the truth ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

oh no! cant they just run away and never look back???? poor severus, i dont want him to ever tell her who her real father is... its gonna break my heart.:( cant wait to read more tho, excellent chapter!

Oh Pleeeeeease, make the chapters longer! I'd gladly forgo a quick update for longer chapters.

~sniff sniff ~ man .. im glad she didnt push sev away ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel