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man ..please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

This is really good!

Another great chapter, I really like the flow of your story and the way they interact with eachother! Keep up the good work and update again soon!

This is one of the most original and unique story lines I have met in over two years of avid fanfiction reading. The author is creative and possesses a very sensitive heart. I am looking forward to reading this tale which I am certain will be eminently worth watching. I salute you Marti. Well done!

So far I love this story. I also love the fact that the updates are quick too.

~lol~ that was great .. im glad that all is well with them ... please update soon ... later for now

angel

What a kid, Jenna. Poor Princes, their world is about to come crashing down, isn't it?

I know eventually there has to be a downside to this story, but so far it is just lovely. You've written Severus beautifully in the roll of dedicated and loving father. Never mind about the house -- write!

I like it. Please update soon.

However Percy officially turns out in the books, he was and shall remain a total git. Any well-loved child that choses to turn his back on his family, regardless of the reason, is just not worth the bother. [Molly's a better mum than I!] LOVE this story. The anguish of poor Severus, it must be hard to write. Of course, Sev always has a life of anguish, but this is different. Not being able to protect Hermione from rape and now having to disclose to his child that she is not his biologically. I think were I the child I might resent the rapist's family trying to barge into my life ... but then on the other hand, they aren't the guilty ones. Ach, but Weasley Righteousness may reign over a Snape/Prince 'owning' one of theirs. Can we say, 'how stupid will Ron be about it?' Looking forward to reading what happens next.