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for Princes in Exile

by Marti

schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, I like it, but you need to finish it. You're killing me.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i suck at chapter names too! i dont bother with them anymore. its too hard although i love your name for this one lol! once again a great chapter. i cant help but find myself hoping that jen snubs the weasleys when she meets them. legal action? pshhh! how dare they! severus is the only father she's had an now they come along poking their noses in? grrr
i hope you update soon so we get to see the creepy stalker some more! cant wait!

Proudtobeamudblood
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6 -- OK so who is the dastardly bogeyman with the imagined 'taste the metallic tang of the blood on his lips'? You're not really going to disrupt Pleasant Valley Sunday at the Princes' house are you? Hurt one of those delightful little girls! Unthinkable!
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch.7 - Toby in a 'Tang! Yeah, I can see it;) But not the minivan, yuck. How suburban! Driving a gaggle of little girls down to the local Chuckie Cheese... sure!

What you writing about PB&J, Mac-n-cheese, and Pizza for, when you're on a diet??? Best of luck with the diet... suggestion - WRITE WHEN YOU'RE HUNGRY [hehehehe]
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i do not think it is fair to make a child under the age of 18 go and see the family of their bio father who raped their mother no child should have to go and listen to that family make the man out to be a great person when he is not. arthur and molly need to be slap around a lot made to see what a slam their son was and that jenn does not want any thing to do with them all that does is open up old wondes
person pittwitch
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, just throw that little tidbit out there then leave? Who's the witch? Have fun. Leaving myself for some sun & sand. Thanks for sharing girl!