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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil Woman!!! Oh but amazing chapter.... good sex bits, wonderful wannabe manipulative Ginny bits, and Harry! Nice chapter
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh you're gonna leave us hanging there??!!! Boo!! Well, I'm confident that he'll be a good friend to her ... (fingers crossed)
Anyway, I'm super glad you've found some inspiration to update, I do adore this story and have been missing it dreadfully! So welcome back!! Looking forward to more...and maybe a wedding??!!
Anyway, I'm super glad you've found some inspiration to update, I do adore this story and have been missing it dreadfully! So welcome back!! Looking forward to more...and maybe a wedding??!!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! that is sooo evil! you are a big meanie. love the story.
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@ ch 20, wow, so now I'm wondering if they go and rush off the wizarding equivalent Vegas...i actually had a friend who did that lol, Elvis chapel and all, shocked the hell out of us. off to read 21!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy heck at @ 21 plot keeps getting deeper! like it!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo that last chapter was definitely umm.. revealing! I kind of hope they do end up role playing, lol, that's my sick and twisted side coming out. I just hope Ginny doesn't screw everything up! She doesn't deserve Harry! I can't wait for more!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter! loved the Harry and Ginny smut. and the whole story of Hermione and Doug was shocking but good. I hope Draco's not gonna let him off with that. I can't wait till Ginny gets her comeuppance as well! hope you make it a good one.
Thanx for your review of late night encounter. I kinda got distracted by the wonderful duo of Sirius and Remus but I have been thinking of writing encounter's last chapter - with some good old-fashioned Dramione smut!
Hope you have a very Merry Christmas too!
Thanx for your review of late night encounter. I kinda got distracted by the wonderful duo of Sirius and Remus but I have been thinking of writing encounter's last chapter - with some good old-fashioned Dramione smut!
Hope you have a very Merry Christmas too!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've really enjoyed the story so far, I can't wait for more. Hope to see more very soon.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read your story on and off for a few months. It has interested me so much so that I keep back to see where it will go. I felt strongly enough about the last chapter to say a few words about domination/submission and rape.
Comment on Chapter 24. Role-playing during sex is probably common so I can see that in the fantasy realm. Hardcore D/s scenarioes between consenting adults beyond what most of us would see on a HBO Real Sex series is probably less common (maybe 25 to 50%), but not a rare occurrence. There are all kinds of structured rules to D/s behavior so that people don't get hurt or only hurt in a way that both persons find pleasurable.
Rape is a whole new category of thing. It is all about power, pain, and humiliation. Women generally have all kinds of rape fantasies that have nothing to do with the horror real rape is.
Here in your story, Hermione is telling Draco about a guy that initiated her into D/s role-playing with no boundaries and no consent besides relying on her passive behavior. Draco is all about the D/s because he is turned on by the role-playing. Hermione is ashamed and embarrassed because she was into it. Cool in that they are stretching pleasure/pain boundaries. Bad karma in that consent is a serious step to rape.
Passivity is not the same thing as giving consent. Repeated passivity does not preclude repeated abuse. If your intention is that Draco is getting off on Hermione's lack of consent...label the story dark fic or non-consenting or the usual label. I don't think that was your intention at all. It was probably about pushing the envelope.
By the end of the chapter my mind skipped away from your story. Women should be able to try non-conventional means to pleasure without being subject to being a forced submissive, violated by another person whether that person is a man or a woman, or scared into fleeing the scene of the crime. It might be me but the point has to be clarified if Draco decides he is going to be a Dom to Hermione's sub.
Fantasy is cool: good, great and wonderful. Anyone who has ever been raped, forced into sexual role-playing that they did not give consent to, or pushed the envelope as to what non-conventional behavior they will engage might have the same antenna broadcast problem with your story's description.
Then again, it is just a story. I am sure no one is introduced to these practices or decides to do the things described therein by just reading your take on it. But if they do, give them a heads up on how subtle this all is.
Respectfully submitted,
Genna
Comment on Chapter 24. Role-playing during sex is probably common so I can see that in the fantasy realm. Hardcore D/s scenarioes between consenting adults beyond what most of us would see on a HBO Real Sex series is probably less common (maybe 25 to 50%), but not a rare occurrence. There are all kinds of structured rules to D/s behavior so that people don't get hurt or only hurt in a way that both persons find pleasurable.
Rape is a whole new category of thing. It is all about power, pain, and humiliation. Women generally have all kinds of rape fantasies that have nothing to do with the horror real rape is.
Here in your story, Hermione is telling Draco about a guy that initiated her into D/s role-playing with no boundaries and no consent besides relying on her passive behavior. Draco is all about the D/s because he is turned on by the role-playing. Hermione is ashamed and embarrassed because she was into it. Cool in that they are stretching pleasure/pain boundaries. Bad karma in that consent is a serious step to rape.
Passivity is not the same thing as giving consent. Repeated passivity does not preclude repeated abuse. If your intention is that Draco is getting off on Hermione's lack of consent...label the story dark fic or non-consenting or the usual label. I don't think that was your intention at all. It was probably about pushing the envelope.
By the end of the chapter my mind skipped away from your story. Women should be able to try non-conventional means to pleasure without being subject to being a forced submissive, violated by another person whether that person is a man or a woman, or scared into fleeing the scene of the crime. It might be me but the point has to be clarified if Draco decides he is going to be a Dom to Hermione's sub.
Fantasy is cool: good, great and wonderful. Anyone who has ever been raped, forced into sexual role-playing that they did not give consent to, or pushed the envelope as to what non-conventional behavior they will engage might have the same antenna broadcast problem with your story's description.
Then again, it is just a story. I am sure no one is introduced to these practices or decides to do the things described therein by just reading your take on it. But if they do, give them a heads up on how subtle this all is.
Respectfully submitted,
Genna
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, this doesn't look very good....I assume Doug has not been completely truthful with Ginny, yeah? Good chapter, and I hope you update soon! Happy Holidays! :D