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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good!! i like your story.. the only part that was slightly confusing for me was the tense change in Hermione's dream in Chapter Two. Other than that, great work!
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start!
Awesome job for it being your first fanfic!
Cannot wait to read more! :)
Awesome job for it being your first fanfic!
Cannot wait to read more! :)
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Start!!!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, Ginny is gonna be pissed! lol
I like your idea so far, but teh switch from calling her a mudblood earlier that day to making out with her that night is kinda fast but eh im sure you have a reason
update soon!!!
I like your idea so far, but teh switch from calling her a mudblood earlier that day to making out with her that night is kinda fast but eh im sure you have a reason
update soon!!!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it please continue
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like your off to a great start.
Waiting for more.
Can she claim Imperius Curse?
Waiting for more.
Can she claim Imperius Curse?
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! You portray the characters so well and I love that! Keep up the good work!