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person mhaj78
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO

NO NO NO

HE CAN'T LEAVE!!! Now Lucius will find him, dammit!!

Ahhh! Okay, well you're the author, I'll trust you on this one!!

Thanks for the update...please please please update again soon...and please get them back together!
person d/hr fan
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Especially the flashbacks.. Although the flashbacks doesn't seem to match with Hermione's reactions when she saw Draco again...cos when they did, Hermione was like confused about her feelings and everything when in fact she's got the hots for Draco waaay before during the flashbacks... Nonetheless, I STILL love your story! Please UPDATE SOON :)
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw...They've wanted each other forever!!! :D
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK ok ok ok ok ok... so they ALWAYS loved eachother(AWW), and I just found out that Dumbledore is gay(SQUEEE!!!!), and the chapter was really lovely and really well written.. and did I mention that JKR announced that Dumbledore was gay tonight!? Just when I thought he couldn't get any cooler. Err this really is me trying to write a review I swear... I am just so in awe right now and I needed to share with someone! Please update soon,I need to know what they do tomorrow!! I hope it's hot lol, although these last few chapters have added enough hotness I think you'll be able to slide with it not being one. Oh I just LOVE this story.

AND DUMBLEDORE IS GAY!! HORRAY!!
person mhaj78
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH....WHAT A CLIFFIE!!

Um, yes, this is a GREAT story! Definitely different than Days Beyond, but it's great to read something else you've written! I'm excited they're going to be togeother. Will look forward to your next update next week!!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh don't worry that was just fine! The flashbacks are good and really working well with the story. I am so looking forward to what happens next - the tension is on a whole new level now. I hope Draco makes good on his promise to make Hermione his cos you know what that means - hotness!

BTW, 'a delectable piece of manflesh' - love it! You paint a very pretty picture of the naughty Draco! Hopefully there will be much more naughtiness next time!

good luck with the next chapter cos I love it!
person mhaj78
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was AMAZING. This whole story is UNBELIEVABLE...you are awesome!!
person mhaj78
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So many SO HOT chapters in a row...you are rocking my world!!
person ginz
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written man but i cant really see where it is going which makes it even better. Keep them coming man.
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Poor Draco. I feel bad for him now. Although I love the fact that he was protecting Harry. :D Can't wait for more!