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by GirlBehindTheRedDoor

schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Wow. That could have been a funny little snippet. I have to say having Pansy and Draco involved actually surprised me with the summary; I was expecting her to be pulling some type of prank on Hermione and somehow Draco got caught up in it. It was certainly unexpected having Hermione be such a trollop.

I can't say as I'm particularly enamored of the piece, and wouldn't be surprised to see a follow-up chapter that makes it darker with Pansy seeking revenge.

Regardless, happy writing to you.

schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it - loved it - loved it!
Oh, yes, I remember being dead and unsure whether I could walk many times *lmao*
Too bad nobody made a tape of all those times... I'd love to look at myself drunk when I'm sober some time later... and I could just picture Hermione and Draco jumping up in shock! *lmao* Did I mention that I loved it??? *g*
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's quite a nice (well, not nice for Pansy, but you know what I mean) story this time around. The beta-ing made your intentions really show through, and it closed up all the story holes you had before. It's not entirely clear what the second vial of potion is?

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