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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY,100 PERCENT ECXACTLY WHAT I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR CREATING SUCH A PERFECT FICS OF DRACO AND HERMIONE!! PLEASE CONTINUE WIT THIS STORY,KEEP IT THE SAME WAY.. NO HARRY NO RON,DAT JUST SO PERFECT.
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done very well done indeed~! That was beautiful it brought tears to my eyes! thank you for updating this awesome Story!!!!!!!
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurted you? Please get a beta, it's really distracting. Besides Hermione falling in love with her rapist so quickly and actually seeking him so he can violate her again is nice fan fic material but you could have build up to it so it's a little more plausible. I still appreciate your effort to bring in some D/s stuff, especially the begging, which most writers don't do enough of in these type of stories...but seriously..how old are you?
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like the storyline, and am looking forward to seeing where the plot leads.
I feel bad for Hermione, but that's her lot as the girl in trouble. I like your Draco very much. I've always seen him as a victim of his surroundings, his circumstances. I'm please he's escaped that and hope he turns into the man Hermione deserves.
Perhaps you should consider getting a beta reader. Try Perfect Imagination's site (it's free, btw). Your grammer and spelling errors really do distract the reader and cause some confusion.
Otherwise I look forward to your next chapter.
-dynonugget
I feel bad for Hermione, but that's her lot as the girl in trouble. I like your Draco very much. I've always seen him as a victim of his surroundings, his circumstances. I'm please he's escaped that and hope he turns into the man Hermione deserves.
Perhaps you should consider getting a beta reader. Try Perfect Imagination's site (it's free, btw). Your grammer and spelling errors really do distract the reader and cause some confusion.
Otherwise I look forward to your next chapter.
-dynonugget
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the updates hope to see another soon
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really realy good but I think you could benefit from getting a beta reader to clean up some of the grammar
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that was intense!!! mind blowing!!! please update SOON!
you have a few mistakes, nothing big, just wanted to tell you!!
your a great writer
you have a few mistakes, nothing big, just wanted to tell you!!
your a great writer
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite good story, I like the begining with Bellatrix helping Draco brake Hermione, it will be nice to see more of that.
I wonder what else will you write and I just hope yo keep the good scenes, did you have already an idea for the ending? it will be interesting if Hermione gets free and discover that she likes being treated that way and maybe help (make) Harry treat her like that (or she can be a new Bellatrix in the area of training).
Any way I really hope you can continue soon.
JO
I wonder what else will you write and I just hope yo keep the good scenes, did you have already an idea for the ending? it will be interesting if Hermione gets free and discover that she likes being treated that way and maybe help (make) Harry treat her like that (or she can be a new Bellatrix in the area of training).
Any way I really hope you can continue soon.
JO
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm such a perv., but I love this story. It so dirty but so enthralling at the same time. I can't wait to see what the drama will be like.
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't think I've read a story like this, well so intense and with two characters doing the deed of the punishment, I really like it though. Please add more soon x