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person oztan
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is good.
person Joanna
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I really like your story :] It has a very interesting plot that's slowly unraveling. I can't wait to read more! I'm an absolute sucker for Draco/Hermione stories, and your story isn't an exception! Love it, dearie. Keep up the good work!

Just a word though, I found a few spelling errors as well as some grammatical errors; an example would be sometimes there'd be a "he" when you meant "her" and vice versa.

Good luck!
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting book so far. I like the premise and can't wait to read more.
person alyson
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intresting. please update soon
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter titles are clearly song titles... 'who knew' is a pink song! Love this story. can't wait for the next chapter. update soon!
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!
I really can't wait to see how this kiss will change their relationship.
This has to be one of my favorite stories. It's one of the most believable.
I mean, the characters personalities haven't changed from the books.
The chapter names are the titles of songs! I love it! I think I've heard most of them too.
Can't wait for more!!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, very well written. It's believable in cannon well not the seventh book ;)

Would love to read more of this.
person Faryal
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey..i really liked ur story n plzzzz do write more soon i really want to knw wht their reactions would be after The Kiss ..................waiting for ur update..hope it comes soon..
person Kilalla
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its cute, really cute. SO what happened from here? more denile? secret relationship?
oh im so excited for your take on the whole thing lol

update soon? yes?