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for Abandon

by LadyOscar2

person bones
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story..but will harry fall for her?and whn does the next chapter b available?
person Lilac
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon ..please .. !!!!!
person slytherin_heiress
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well written! H/Hr smuts are always a delight to read, especially this one. Please do update soon.

~Shine
person raven
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories that i have read in a very long time....please hurry nad update...im curios to knwo what happens next!
person eden21
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good, i hope you update soon i want to see what happens.
person Jay
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word describes this story.... Great!!!
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is GREAT! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!
pls update soon!
i'm dying to know what happens next!!!!!~~
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a well-written, well characterized piece of fiction that it would be a shame not to finish it. Please continue!
person awaltz
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just read this story and i think it is wonderful. please continue and pdate very soon. i think they way you have portrayed the characters are really good. they seem very human.. yes a bit ooc but who cares it still i great story. the whole scen with her being alone and the breathing in her ear! holy goodness waS that scary. it creeped me out i had a dream about it because it was so scary. well down and well written. keep up the good work. also i think that this story is great and you should post it other places because everyone should read it. you could post it on ff.net, portkey.org, or even harmony erotic ( which is a lj community)., u are a great writer keep p the good work