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by LadyOscar2

schedule April 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I find this an irritatingly stupid story.  Hermione's response to the 'stalker' is totally out of character.  She is too logical not to have told Harry.  Their 'arrangement' doesn't make any sense.  I know it's fiction but there has to be some coherance.  The gaps between paragraphs are ridiculously huge, only one line is required.

person Yuki Kim
schedule April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow she really enjoy doing those activities with him...lol
person Night Owl
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am so glad that I found this fic! Fantastic job creating full characters - there is enough mystery about them to be original, yet enough familiarity to be close to canon. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Happy writing!
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm loving it! I wanna hear more about this invisible stalker though. Update quickly please.
person RCB
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and had totally forgotten about it. Browsing through my favorites, I found it, and was a bit sad to see it had never been completed. Good story.
person Rayne
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm begging you, please finish this one day. I'd love to see how you plan on ending this!
person purplethumbelina
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lady Oscar,

First of all, I want you to know that I LOVE your story; in fact, I've been waiting for you to update since.. well, forever. Hehe. So yah, just so you know, you still got plenty of fans out there. :)

I hope you'll continue this story because it's SO good.. It'd be a shame to leave it hanging like this. :( If you don't plan to finish this though, would it be too much to ask a summary from you (I mean, a summary of how you originally planned for the story to go)? This would really put me out of my misery... Hehe.

Again, I absolutely adore this fic, and so here's to hoping you get inspired to write soon! Thanks! :)

Cheers,
purplethumbelina
person Ian
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, keep updating this story!! I can't wait to see what happens next, and if Harry can ever talk about what has happened.
person bluetooth
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. It's really gripped my attention, not to mention that it's HOT. Will you be updating soon?
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talk about one sexy story! I hope to to read the rest of this story soon. So, please update!