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by impiriusvirgo

person anaon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a wife, your throwing this at me now? AAAAAHHHHHH! anyway, i really like the story so far and you made me laugh with the damn matramony, cissy would never let me bid bit. very funny. I did want to know why Ron was not expelled. rape, attempted rape and sexual assult are all grounds for explling students at the school where I teach. yep, I am a teacher. i never type things or write them on hte board. always dictate 'em cause I cant spell. hehe.
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... they're screwed. Then again, how bad could it be? Five days. Alone. With Severus Snape. *shudders in delight* I suppose she'll have to lose her virginity then, won't she?

Awwwwwww. I've never seen the "Snape had a wife" aspect before. A very good twist.

By any chance, does your name have anything to do with a Ms. Elizabeth Bennet from Pride and Prejudice.

Anyway, great story. Can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Damn it to hell!" I can just see Snape yelling that out. The plot is horribly intriguing, and I'm enjoying it very much. So they need Elizabeth's virginity to renew Voldemort's former beauty, eh? Brilliant. Elizabeth is a brilliant liar though. Please update soon.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I really want to know what it going to happen next.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Snape to the rescue, right? Mmmmm... being Snape's sex slave doesn't sound that bad. Can't wat for more.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ron was the one charactor that got completly out of my hands.
But I find I kind of like him as a prick.... mwhahaha. Hopefully the plot bunny will tell me a way to get him back to at least Ron-like. *smiles*

Hope everyone is enjoying it! You don't even know how much it makes my day when I see I have another review!
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have an idea as to what exactly the rumour that Ron started is, but I won't say it for fear of being wrong. You really made Ron completely and certifiably insane in this one. I don't mind, though. He is an annoying little prick. Please write more!
person Rodger
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update a.s.a.p, I loved it!
person kayla
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! It was cute but sad that ron would do that to her. please update very soon!
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Continuing to enjoy the story. That ribbon thing was really sweet. Write more and post it soon!