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for The Unexspected

by impiriusvirgo

schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*takes a bottle of prozac....realizes it's not helping so swigs vodka instead*.....that was so very very sad and depressing.... i mean that in the way it is suppose to be such but....*cries* that poor girl it must have been a really hard chapter to write once can only wonder how much he's going to tell elizabeth about what really happened.....talk about scarred for life. Good up date though nice bit of writing there.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was terrible! Poor Snape and his wife. No wonder he's the way he is. I know it's not how JK Rowlings had it but I think I like your theory better. Yours at least let's him have some happiness and good in his life. She didn't she just killed him off. Make's me so mad. I did have to stop reading for a few seconds because I forgot what was going on. I was like wait a second this story isn't about Snape as a teenager then I remembered that she asked about his wife so that must have been him reliving the memory or him telling her. Well I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm really interesting can't wait to read more
person Maraina
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. It is so amazing. Hurry and write more! please. I'm dying to read more.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha I like the whole Snape sarcastically suggesting that he take her virginity. But I agree with her that I wouldn't have wanted mine to be removed surgically and the first person you had sex with was Voldemort. Well I hope you update soon. I want to know what happened to his wife.
person Josie
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read a lot of fanfiction but your story seems to really captivate me.

I have been constantly checking the website to see if your new chapter has come up yet and frankly I am becoming frustrated.

Your story is unique and I am quite literally dying for new chapters. SO PLEASE UPDATE!!

I love your story and I need to see more!!
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Type faster lol i need to find out what happens T.T anyways really great fan fiction by the way ^__^
person Rodger
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee, update soon! I really really love this particular fic. Beautiful!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope the next update is longer. Driving me crazy here! But I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the last part. Damnit to hell! It was too funny for some reason. Well I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter.