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person Lyria
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really intrigued by the story so far. The characters are believeable, as is the situation, whilst remaining amusing. I'm looking forward to seeing exactly what happens between them- please continue!
person Elizabeth
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, goody! A new LaB story!
I'm usually an ss/hg shipper, but I'm starting to like lm/hg as well, due to your writing.
Next chappie, please!
person Nitesong
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First "The Wedding", and now this...I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The tension is already feeling stifling in that small cell. LOL. But man, to choose between having Lucius' touch or one of those disgusting guard's...seems like a hard choice. Good job, La Bib!
person Citten
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now i so know why i love your stories you always seem to have build up and you say and descrilbe things so well that i dont get lost or am trying to figure out where you are going or what is happening!
well onward to story?-right? :) as before... more please!!!!!!!
person dragon37
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter reminded me of 'Closet Land', when Hermione told Lucius how she was thrown in there without a fair trial. I love how you have Lucius very calm through out this ordeal.
person Lazart
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brillaint chapter!! can't wait for more so update soon!
person Pumkin
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well done so far. i can't wait to see where you take it. keep up the good work and update soon please.
person wicraven
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha I like how Malfoy is putting her perdiciment into something positive for him.
Is Hermione going to be taught how to do wandless magic?