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schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!! What a place to end the chapter! I was like, NO!!! More... there has to be more... you are going to post more soon, right? PLEASE? pretty please??? I want another chapter. (pouts)

Oh, and by the way... Great chapter!

Shiloh
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! That was so funny and sexy having Lucius play connect the dots all over Hermione
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah a chappie. much love
person ccrawley
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good of a new story. This looks to be a delightful and charming story. Hopefully, Hermione gets to give a little back to those that locked her up.
person moxie
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it. please continue. please.
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,wow,wow! Now this is going to be good. I love what I've read so far. Yes Lucius you may touch all you want. I could think of worse ways to spend five years in jail.
I can't wait to read more.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so much fun! I loved the whole bucket scenario with Hermione and Lucius bickering the whole time. She certainly isn
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm will lucius tell sev about mione being his new cell mate .. i hope thier plean works .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... He shall, he shall! He can touch me anywhere he wants... Rolling eyes and laughing! I feel like Donkey from Shrek... "Pick Me!!! Pick ME!!!"

Interesting story here! I am really intrigued. It is different from your others and I am definitely looking forward to more! Soon, I hope!

Shiloh