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schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person cor
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter...the plot thickens. I like that Lucius is so unnerved by the whole situation...it makes for a good read. :)
person moxie
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it - more please! but I;m confused. How did they suddenly begind to bond??
person unkown8
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!I love this story and your Lucius,I'm mean I always loved Lucius but damn now I want to go to Azkaban,please continue,keep going please,I love the way you present his masculinity,and of course Hermione!
person wolviesrogue
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have only just found your fic and could not wait to let you know how much i am enjoying it so far.These two have become a firm favourite of mine and i was so pleased to find a quality fic such as yours.I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... what will happen next ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person misslala
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness!!!! I like that take on their relationship. :) I LOVE the descriptions, her asking if he also tears wings off fairies and the constant flux of emotion. It's absolutely beautiful, brilliant and aptivating at the same time! ;) You, my dear woman, are incredible. I think you have outdone yourself with the start of this and that is saying something!

I cannot wait for more!
person Amethyst Sigris
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent as usual. I love how Lucius is so sexually frustrated he can hardly help himself. What I think would probably top the proverbial cake for Lucius, is if he started to have naughty dreams about his little female. Maybe having to deal with an erection the entire day, and then try to wank off under the sheets while trying to remain inconspicuous. Lol. That would be great any day. Well, anyway... I'm glad your back. I missed you!

-Amethyst
person JW
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1-5 - wow, this is very different from your last fic. I'm curious what he's digging for under her cot, and if she'll be pleased or angry when she discovers what it is. Looking forward to Severus and finding out why she is in Azkaban!
person A
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I pretty much read all your stories and I love the Lucius/hermione ones best! Keep up the good work!Hopee this is a good review lol!