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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! more more more! please... i love this story.
wondefully written, please update soon.
wondefully written, please update soon.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it please update soon.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter so looking forward to next one
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very sweet charpter, at least first half. This Hermione is very close to the one in Harry Potter series, intelligent, brave, passionate but at the same time innocent.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the mental bonding, and Hermione being an innocent (wink wink) and how she knows he's fibbing... and and I just loved it all. More please!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm...what tickled my fancy....yee gads it tickled so much I nearly had to run to the loo!
I think the is fantastic!!
I think the is fantastic!!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How cruel to stop there - please continue!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have mercy on me, and Lucius, please? Great night in the day, trapped with an innocent little virgin minx in only her night clothes. AARRRGGGGHHH!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@6 great story update soon
*DB*
*DB*
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're kidding me, right? You want to know what we liked? Geez! The sex! Just kidding. I really love this story. The interaction between the two is great. It's fraught with tension and hums with electricity. I can't wait to see what happens next!