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schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was dying for an update, and this was definately worth the wait! I'm really quite anxious to find out just what and who has put the unlikely couple in this position... But on a more fun note, the little bits of delightful smut were wonderful, and I can't help adore how Lucius constantly refers to Hermione as Tidbit. Adorable!

Keep up the amazing work and please, please, please, update again soon!
person Pumkin
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay when you say hot water dose that mean in trouble or maybe a bath? you do realise you suck. i know you apologized for the cliffy but come on. i hope you update soon. keep up the good work.
person ccrawley
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The cliffhanger was worth the truffles. If you were a drinking person, it might next have to be some champagne to assist with any heralds to the next chapter. Was a very nice and sweet chapter. Was totally surprised by the marriage idea. If only a man could marry a woman and indeed be the end all protector.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh man does that mean that he is going to take the boils of her .. i hope le fay does marry them .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting turn of events I think I will enjoy the outcome good job
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're evil! ;) Your description of Lucius has got me a bit hot & bothered! I wouldn't mind taking a bite of him either! Can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the bloody brilliant work.
person DB1
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@8 aww how could you leave it there? update soon

*DB*
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He's offered to MARRY her?? I didn't see that coming; interesting proposition.

I want to know the identities of the dastardly villains as well.

So there is going to be a wedding and a murderous plot to thwart. Classic drama; this is better than a Victorian novel, with all the great plot elements AND quality smut. Yay.
person wolviesrogue
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If that isn't a bomb...marriage to Lucius. I would take that offer hands down. LOL. Good job LaBib!