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person Anon
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sorry for the lack of review on my part. My computer fried about two weeks ago or less -can't remember. I'm really sorry for not reviewing the last three chapters. I read chapter five and that was my last one in like two weeks. So the first thing I did when I bought myself this wonderful new computer (after two weeks of hard working), was to log on and go straight to your file and read what I've missed. Excellent chapters. Love them. I can't wait to read chapter nine. Thing are getting heated up. Finally. Update soon. Lucius is using his sneaky mind. If he isn't Hermione's idol man? He sure as hell is mine. Lol. He's one sexy man.

Atomic_Kitten
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH!Oh!Oh! How cruel can you be? I hope you update soon! Don't make me come after you!
person feline
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story its amazingly well done i'm exited for chapter 9
feline
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, again a brilliant chapter:-))) Update soon
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aah did you have to start the new chapter like this? Okay, I found the fic to be very entertaining but right now you ruined it. I really dont like the seduction with the muscles and all. bwehhh partypooper
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually I kind of like cliffies. It gives me something to really look forward to. Of course I know a lot of people probably disagree. :D

schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger well done exciting chapter looking forward to next one already
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy crap! I love these Lucius/Hermione fics. i think they could have been a perfect match! I love your writing, and as a fellow(fellowess? is that a word? Ah, who cares!) writer I'm not going to beg rabidly for an update, but you know as well as I do that the fans love it!!
person misslala
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. :) Lucius is ever the scheming bastard that I love to hate, or is it hate to love? Anyway, another spectacular chapter. I adore the way Hermione is ready to bed him without a thought, and of course, Lucius is ready to bed her as well. Who is lurking in the shadows, trying to kill and frame our favourite lovers!? Readers must know. Please update soon, dear. :) As always, a pleasure. Until next time.
person Mary
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, please. I love this story.