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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah finally Harry and Ron are getting involved good chapter
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. I don't know if you meant to do it this way. But the diction in which you described the whole sex scene from beginning to end sort of made me think that we were viewing it totally from Hermione's perspective as a virgin. And I thought that was very creative if intentional.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@10 wow great chapter, loved it. update soon
*DB*
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Lucius... I would like to borrow him for a while and then give him back ot Hermione nicely sated. haha I'm so bad!!! Eloquent and savvy as always. :) I love your style. My eyes are too tired for me to write more, but I loved it and can't wait for more. :) Cheers~
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I like to wake up with a lemon, especially when no drop of lemon juice is left unexamined. Mmmm.
Cheeky sod, though, 'Are all Mudbloods built like this?'. He wants to clean up his vocabulary. Hope he isn't too injured; he needs to get a pair of gloves at least for that wife of his. Ouch!
Aha, so Ron and Harry don't know what's happened to Hermione. I bet they haven't considered the possibility of her being in bed with Lucius Malfoy... Ah, cute twins. Is Draco going to turn up at any point?
Cheeky sod, though, 'Are all Mudbloods built like this?'. He wants to clean up his vocabulary. Hope he isn't too injured; he needs to get a pair of gloves at least for that wife of his. Ouch!
Aha, so Ron and Harry don't know what's happened to Hermione. I bet they haven't considered the possibility of her being in bed with Lucius Malfoy... Ah, cute twins. Is Draco going to turn up at any point?
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I enjoyed the bathroom scene. Hermione's kind of foward -been her fist time and all, I mean. Nevertheless, she's a lioness through and through. I shouldn't forget that. LOL. Ciao.
Atomic_Kitten
Atomic_Kitten
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter 10. update soon.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update and the lemons:-)) I am glad you decided to not change your story to be DH-compliant, not all of book seven was to my liking (infact, quite a lot was not to my liking), so having a alternative universe in fanfiction is my "salvation". I love to find stories that gives me other solutions than the one JKR made, and your story is really great as it is, there is no need to make it more cannon:-))
Update again soon!!
Update again soon!!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I hope you liked the lemon." *Grin* You are evil, evil, evil. You know we did. I'm in love with Lucius (or at least in serious lust.But then who isn't?), and I love this wicked/evil/fun/drool-worthy story.