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person ccrawley
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More. How did Harry find Her? And what has happened to Snape?
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved smut part two - I'm sure Lucius loves being used! I can just imagine that gorgeous butt laid out beneath me just waiting to be bitten! Woo, need to calm down!

And the plot thickens about what happened to Hermione. It is going to be so fun when Harry comes to visit cos you just know Lucius will enjoy tormenting Harry.

I can't wait for more (hopefully more smutty goodness?! please!)
person DB1
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@11. great chapter, I hate waiting so long for chapters! update soon

*DB*
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, I would so like to see Harry's voice when he realises he is visiting Mrs Malfoy instead of Miss Granger.

So we have a little background concerning their incarcerations, although mystery still surrounds the elements that are unfriendly to Hermione...

Super-duper morning-after smut - Hermione really needed that shower, didn't she? Poor Lucius, though, waking up to a bitten bot - I'm not sure I'd take it as well as he did! He's a game lad, isn't he?
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, Harry's voice????

What's wrong with me? Of course I mean his face.
person Kimberly
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story. Oh man, Harry is gonna go off the deep end on this one, but I think he will be grateful that Lucius is "protecting" her from the harsher guards. What a wonderful author you are.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!! A great chapter. Bring on the smut!! Wonderful work...Update soon!!
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sure even Lucius would admit that the butt-bite was worth what he gained overall. LOL.
person misslala
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling that Harry is going to flip out, but that's just me. LOL I mean, it's Harry! LOL Very hot smut... more plz? :P I am awaiting the next chapter with eager pateince... :X
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMmmm yummy Lucius butt. I would take a bite out of it too :) I wonder what Harry will do when he finds out that they are married, and more importantly why Hermione is in jail. Can't wait for your next chapter. Also if you are interested, I have posted the third and final part to my "Surprise" trilogy.