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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. You've got an interesting plot line with lots of action and its written pretty darn well. I love how you've written both Hermione and Lucius. Love those two together. Can't wait to see more. ^^
-Becki
-Becki
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@12. aww thats sad i want them together!! update soon
*Db*
*Db*
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, well done. i do like a bit of mystery.
and the fact that opinions haven't changed
just yet are good, too. Harry's dislike of
Lucius is excellent, as i'm sure it would
take him longer than to hear that Malfoy
and Hermione are married to make him amenable
to the other wizard.
no death threats, my dear. this is one of the
few stories i await updates on and each one
is always good for a thrill of one kind or
another.
i love this story and the way the characters
interact with one another. i'd love to see,
though i won't hold my breath given the
nature of things, Harry and Snape join forces
with Hermione to get Lucius out and to see
justice done to those two louts who thought
to frame her in the first place.
i'll sit here, quietly twiddling my thumbs and
toes, waiting for another update, as i've
nothing better to do.... oh, wait. i've got
chapters to work on. silly me. best get back to
writing.
~blessings~
ldf
and the fact that opinions haven't changed
just yet are good, too. Harry's dislike of
Lucius is excellent, as i'm sure it would
take him longer than to hear that Malfoy
and Hermione are married to make him amenable
to the other wizard.
no death threats, my dear. this is one of the
few stories i await updates on and each one
is always good for a thrill of one kind or
another.
i love this story and the way the characters
interact with one another. i'd love to see,
though i won't hold my breath given the
nature of things, Harry and Snape join forces
with Hermione to get Lucius out and to see
justice done to those two louts who thought
to frame her in the first place.
i'll sit here, quietly twiddling my thumbs and
toes, waiting for another update, as i've
nothing better to do.... oh, wait. i've got
chapters to work on. silly me. best get back to
writing.
~blessings~
ldf
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore the twist. Thanks for making being sick in bed with strep throat enjoyable.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know you're awesome! The story is a great read, but poor Lucius, he needs to be back with Hermione in no more than 2 or 3 chapters...can we do that? ..please?
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Hermione is FREE YEAH!! But I do hope that Harry does not turn out to be a giant (Insert choice word here) about the whole marrage thing some acceptince would be nice to see Ron too for that matter I am sure he wont be pleased with this at first sight .
hope to see another update soon
hope to see another update soon
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! I can't even imagine how she must feel, and trying to explain to her friend what's going on is even worse! At least she is out, now she has to get Lucius out!!! He must be free. So... my guess is she is already pregnant and before long will be sending letters to indicate her state and Lucius is even more frustrated than ever. Argh! You must update soon! :)
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. im glad mione is out i hope she and sev can get lucius out to ...and how is getting them in trouble... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later of now
angel
angel
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I felt so bad for both Lucius and Hermione. It was heartbreaking. I hope that Lucius will get out of prison soon, so he and Hermione can be together again. As for Harry trying to get Hermione to forget her marriage to Malfoy is futile. I doubt she'll stand for that. If anybody can help Lucius' appeal it's Hermione!! I look forward to finding out what happens next to our dynamic duo. Oh and the picture of Jason Issacs had bee drooling!! *Puts away drool cloths* Keep up the excellent work, and please update soon!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
On the edge of my seat awaiting more of the story with the plot thicking. Yeah! Can hardly wait to see who is setting who up.