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schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another ace chapter despite there being no Lucius. I'm glad Ginny is on Hermione's side and I loved the way Hermione told Ron about her and Lucius.

I hope Hermione will be allowed to visit Lucius - hopefully a conjugal one!

hope you'll be posting soon and maybe there might be a little bit of Lucius in the next chapter. I am willing to send gifts if that would persuade you!
person doodle
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am much better thank you for the wishes. Please don't make us wait too long before they are back together. I like the analogy of Ron and a bull elephant. I have always seen him as a "bull in a china shop kind of personality. Doesn't mean the destruction he causes!
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. im glad ginnys is on mione's said..i hope she can find out who did this to her and what papers where taken... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Anon
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Is Lucius appearing anytime soon to be with his 'wife'?
Update soon.
Atomic_Kitten
person Janeplay
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories!! This one is so cool. I love the mystery people... Great tease!
person x-Lazart-x
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOl I can't blame Hermione for running out after telling Ron! I love your story!! It's one of my favourites and I can't wait for more so update ASAP!
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Hermione. The way you write about Hermione missing Lucius is ripping at my heart. I really feel for her. You are so good at writing Lucius and Hermione fictions!
I have a feeling Hermione is going to find herself pregnant soon. Am I right ????????
Ok, ok I'll let you write the story.
I can't wait to find out what happens next. Great job as always.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Greetings, Your Majesty ;-).

I like that: 'growing a bumper crop of goose pimples'. Poor Hermione can't even talk about Lucius to her friends; how lonely for her.

Wow, Uncle Vernon's heard of Stockholm Syndrome - has he been on some kind of course? LOL. It's a very interesting theory and would make a good basis for a story in its own right, I've always thought.

Ha ha 'faceful of irritated witch knuckles' - I LOVE your turn of phrase.

At least she can talk to Ginny, though. I guess Ron and Harry aren't going to be much help with the appeal.
person Heidi
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent. I loved how Hermione is using disguises to work on Lucius' case and I also loved how she told Ron about Lucius. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Hermione has left Azkaban. It's only too bad Lucius is not with her, and Ron and Harry don't take too well to the idea she's married a Death Eater. But I think her friends' responses are predictable. I hope they can see past their thick skulls and see that Hermione is happy. Ginny at least has some sense. Someone is pulling strings at the Ministry, and I can't wait to find out whom. Of course seeing Lucius would be even better.