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schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Last two chapters were pretty good. I like how Hermione won't give up on Lucius - hope she's going on a conjugal visit very soon!

As for naming Harry's penis, I have to say that was a bit odd, and detracted a bit from the smut.

Otherwise, good work, and am looking forward to reading your next!
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person DB1
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@13. aww thats evil hermione, announcing it like that. loved the chapter update soon

*DB*
person ravenxl2
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I have been reading it for a while ^^ keep up the good work ^^
person kmcarroll
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I hope you keep up the great work and I look forward to the rest of the story!!
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM

So this is the Hermione Chapter! I have to say, you have me completely mystified as to who the bad guys are. Have you used cannon characters or did you come up with somebody new? I know, I know, you can
person reva
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Nice cliffe there. Oh poor poor Ronald.
Great job writing this chapter, can't wait to see more.

That and to find out what Hermione is going to do about Lucius' imprisonment.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THERE'S the Ron we all know and love. Not the cheating playboy, not the stalking, murderous ex, not the perfectly understanding sop, but temperamental RON. I love that you don't completely rewrite Rowling's characters to fit your needs. Keep it coming!
person A. Johnson
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter, as always.