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you have a wonderful mind. the thing you come up with. i can't wait to see how things turn out. please update soon and keep up the good work.

Okay - so I read the intro to this chapter. No Lucius, but there's smut, but it's not Snape smut. In a story of yours, how on Earth is this even possible? ;-p

I'm looking forward to finding out. I do so love your stories. Fantastic imagination. So.... I'm off to see how this unlikeliest of smut-fests unfolds here.

Aha! Harry sex?!? OMG. I can't deal - I just can't deal. I never delve into the adult-fic with the younger characters. It's totally my own silly aversion - I fully support anyone writing and enjoying younger crowd smut. And I suppose, with all of poor Harry's trials and tribulations, a little smut is well-deserved. At least you didn't make him all wimpy and Ginny's no fool. All in all, very satisfactory.

I was wondering when they'd catch on to the missing supplies. They had to be going somewhere... And I'm dying to know just who at the Ministry is such a nasty little thief. I love the Voice One and Voice Two conversations - they're fraught with conniving wickedness and I love a good mystery.

I'm looking forward to more Lucius smut and - if possible - some Snape smut, which is always soooo enjoyable. Surely there's some wanton little witch who'd take a tumble with the Headmaster of Hogwarts, no? Emphasis on Master. Carry on!

So if Hermione's getting these headaches, I suppose Lucius must be too? Poor thing.

Now Snape's on the case, any dastardly loo-roll black-marketeers should beware! (Can't help thinking Snape needs a love interest here...maybe a Persian storytelling Princess?) Love the way he shoved the portraits out into the corridor for interfering. BUT...a word I don't know! What's 'kibitzing'?

Nice bit of smut too, even if it is Harry/Ginny...eww. And I did love Harry's reaction to the concept that his precious ickle Hermione was actually shagging big, bad Lucius. LOL. Going to the North Sea to see a wizard about his dick! I might just jump on that ferry with him. Heh Heh.

Keep the great work up!

Oh god the toilet paper was great. To use that as clue blows away all the severity a usual mystery has because TP is such a random thing we use everyday. It's like we take it for granted. LOL. Great job with that idea! I like this Snape, he was very mellow, but still had that usual bite. And the little bit when Harry finds out about Hermione no longer being innocent, that was so hilarious. It's such a Ginny kind of thing. Wonderful! I can't wait to see Lucius.

Excellent smut scene. Pity, it wasn't Lumione. I miss Lucius with Hermione.

okay, that chapter gave me the giggles.
don't ask me why, because i don't know.
but it did.

the smut was good, though i'll wait
patiently for the Lucius smut to
return.

good chapter, darling. thank you.

~blessings~
ldf

ooo mione's gonna kick some major butt...and snape is going to help
yay!

I read the first part of the chapter and everything up until harry and ginny started getting it on. I just can't stomach that...but the interaction between hermione and snape was good, the rest, not so good.