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schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Poor Hermione and Lucius. Why can't anybody in that stupid prison, see how much they want and need to be together? ANd why is Lucius being so stubborn? If Hermione is pregnat, then Lucius needs to know. ANd Severus is just the Slytherin to get Hermione into Ascaban without being detected. Please add more I'm loving this story and I'm sorry for the ranting fit. But I just want Hermione and Lucius to be together, so they can find out why somebody wanted Hermione in Ascaban, in Lucius's cell and dead. Pretty please add more soon.
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*swings in on a random jungle vine attached to a ceiling in the Realm of Reviews*

I'll save Hermione's and Lucius's marriage! With the power of the positive review!

Seriously, as usual I love where the story is going. Severus's character is perfect, not too soft and not a total prick. I really wish I had some suggestions for improvement, as I rarely review without one, but you're just too good at this.
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man ... i think she should tell snape that about the baby and then he can tell lucius and maybe that will help him and i hope they done break the link... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person mandy
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't put them together so passionately and then rip them apart, espcially when a baby is coming! i don't understand why lucius is in such a funk, not even wanting letters from his wife. somehow, she needs to go to see him and tell him he's going to be a daddy again! maybe harry's invisibility cloak? or polyjuice potion? update soon!!
person Kitten
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooo scruffy Lucius!!! Bring the old one back! Give him a comb! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! I'm heartbroken...
person Janeplay
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool, but just what can you do with ordinary loo paper in the magic world? Has someone set up their own supermarket chain then? I still love it!
person doodle
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
toliet paper is as valuable as gold! When we evacuated for a hurricane the one thing we make sure is in every car is a roll of toliet paper. Thanks for the laugh and I look forward to more.
doodle
person etirps
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why did you have to include ginny and harry....yuck
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never saw Harry Potter in such a light.....I LOVED IT!!! You are so GREAT at what you do. I have been following this story and hanging on to every word, replacing batteries frequently, and all this while trying to make my own story sound readable. Love it. Write more. Now....
person jw
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 12-14 - yay, she's out of Azkaban!! And Ginny is on her side. I am afraid for Hermione going anywhere by herself; she needs to have witnesses with her so she doesn't get accused again. I wonder if it will be Snape or Hermione who figures out that Lucius is being framed as well... Severus must know what Lucius was doing before he went to prison, right? Well, I'm sure our author will figure out how to get Lucius free soon. Thanks for the new chapters!!