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schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god - she's pregnant! Oh as if there wasn't enough drama in this story. If Lucius would just stop being so stubborn - they so need to see each other again.

Of course the bonus is the longer they are apart the better and more electric it'll be when they meet up.

please post soon!
person mary
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Poor Lucius! Wish Severus would talk some sense into him. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A bit uneventful, but necessary to lead us through a new part of the plot. OH and THANK YOU, THANK YOU! No more harry/ginny banging. Ewwwww...scrubs fingers over eyes trying to erase what I had read...eww.
person Korrigan
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!Baby? Lucius better stop being an ass!I think he would make a GREAT father!I love this story your doing wonderfully!!!
person DB1
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@ 15 aww sad chapter for hermione and lucius. Cyclops??? lmao!!! awesome chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, poor Lucius is sinking into the mire of depression. Sounds like Snape should be slipping him a Pepper-Up Potion along with those Daily Prophets.

And what on earth is he going to say when he finds out about Hermione's pregnancy?

I feel for them both...hope they get a bit of happiness soon.
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please get our lovers back together. They lover each other and need to be together. Besides, they need to have lots of hot sex before Hermione's belly gets to big.
person ldf
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, my yes. very twisted.

can't wait for more. please don't torture
the two of them for too long.

~blessings~
ldf
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting even more interesting. I hope that Hermione csn get through to Lucius and finally get him set free. They need each other and more so now because of the baby that he still doesn't know about. He should at least accept letters from her. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.