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schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(gulps down firewhiskey) Oh my god! why are they both so bloody stubborn. great chapter! and yet more intrigue about who's behind all this. please post soon!

now, where's the rest of that whiskey? happy ending, happy ending, happy ending...
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor mione and lucius .... why did he have to do that and will lucius ever find out about the baby .... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Takes pre-offered Firewhiskey and takes a long sip* Lucius and Hermione are even more alike then I thought. They both think that the other doesn't care for them. I agree that Lucius perception of how Hermione really feels for him has to happen gradually. The torture is exqusite. And the identities of who set all of this up is starting to come into focus a bit. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work! *Finishes off her glass of Firewhiskey and pours another*
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dang that Lucius, I like to throttle him! Ok I'm done ranting. Please add more this story is getting really good. And honestly Hermione needs to tell Lucius about the baby. Just a thought. Lucius needs to wake up and smell the roses. Ok I'm done ranting again. Please add more, I will not be responsible for what my muse does lol!
person Citten
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! okay i am going to be calm. i am........calm-NOT!!!!!!!! okay so when is the next chapter due? well you better be coming up with something and fast because i am going to start suggesting a whole slue of things and soon if you dont start writing! by-the-way totally love the story and the twists, but boy does lucius need to get off his high horse- for he is about to be a daddy again AND he does not know it yet! oh one more thing please DONT skip that much time if you can help it, PLEASE! i would hate to have it be that he does not know it for a long time after she has the baby and have the whole doubt thing going on, k. well the writintg is up to you now -please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
person XOXO
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is FANTASTIC! I love the interaction between them. Seriously, Hermione could ONLY match up with snake-skinned older men.

Loving you story,
The person loving your story!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! I
person Hinansho
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole thing in one go and I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow it seems very lonley for her. I like all your stories but these one is amazing.I just keep wanting to read what going on.
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I hope Lucius won't do anything stupid and hurt Hermione, but I fear he will. Hopefully he will come to realise how much she loves him and that blood doesn't count for anything. Update again soon!!!