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after that chapter, i need two shots of fire whiskey! what are you doing? what is wrong with lucius? why is he pushing her away? why didn't hermione tell him that she's pregnant (ok, i KNOW why she didn't, but still). please update soon. until then, i'm chanting the mantra... happy ending, happy ending!

now that was just bloody evil of you.
and, sadly, the two of them are too
damned stubborn to see that they're
both in need of the same thing.

best update soon, or your Muse and i
shall have several long, harsh, cruel
words.

looking forward to more.

~blessings~
ldf

Wow LaBib! Excellent job!! How tragic! I

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Bring them back together you evil evil evil bibliographe! Ummm... please? =)

No! I could avada his arse for Hermione -even though I like it, too, much. Is Hermione's pregnancy showing soon? or are we going to wait for a while -for Lucius to notice her condition, I mean? Update soon. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE. And not that I'm been mean to Lucius, or anything, but I liked how Hermione had the last word. Lucius always has the last words on every fic that I've read before. A new change. So glad to notice. I wonder what's going to happen next. Is Lucius going back to his old life? as in attending upperclass baquets? Is he going to try and lose himself with other woman just to earse Hermione out his mind? I can't wait to read more. I'm sorry If you can't understand what I've said. Somemtimes I can't stop my self from writing or talking better yet.

Atomic_Kitten

Is a tranquilizer potion one of those "do not mix with alcohol, do not operate heavy machinery" type dealies? Cuz I think tranquilizer potion mixed with firewhiskey should do the trick.

While I'm QUITE upset that they broke off the marriage, I love that you're keeping us on our toes. Let's face it, once two characters are together, accepting of their love and settled into bliss, the story's almost over.

Wow. That was so difficult. And this is so hard on Hermione. Well, anyway, I will keep chanting happy ending until I see where you take it.

@16. what?! Noooo they have to be together!!!..... Not happy!!!!!! update soon

*DB*

Well! Hermione pregnant and Lucius being a terrible doofus. I know, happy ending happy ending, I've read your other stories and we'll get there eventually. I'm glad they're both out of jail now, this split can't last for long. I was wondering, what did Lucius see in the newspapers that made him think Hermione has so many beaux? Obviously she doesn't but was she out on the town trying to sway some Ministry opinions in his favor and got popped by the paparazzi? There's a scary thought - magical paparazzi who can apparate - Oy!

Oh, and way for Lucius to be grateful for Hermione getting him out of prison. Sheesh. Some guys take forever to pick up the clue phone and I'm afraid your Lucius is one of them. I know, he's deeply wounded and afraid of being hurt and out of control but he's as pig-headed as... as... a MAN. ;^p I'm so glad he can take care of his gorgeous hair properly now. Lucius should never have split ends.

Hermione is not catching any breaks this year, eh? Falsely arrested, tossed in Azkaban, pregnant by the baddest Death Eater there ever was...sigh. Poor thing. Well, she's a tiny little mite - no doubt the pregnancy will show and Lucius will be in for a shock. Probably when he's out and about with some pureblood bimbo he can't stand anyway, all the while pining away for Hermione. Ha!

I'm sad that there will be no Snape smut - as you say, there's lots of it available in other stories. Can't say I'll miss the Harry/Ginny smut, but to each their own.

It was interesting to see more about Thing One and Thing Two, the evil toilet paper thieves. So they plan to use their ill-gotten gains to take over the Ministry. Hmm.. diabolical, but they don't seem to trust each other much. Thick as thieves is a bit thinner than people say.

So, I'm loving this story, just as I love all of your stories. Lucius is such a great character and so often neglected. It's nice to see he has a devoted scribe like you.

omg omg omg omg please update soon i have to know what happens next.