rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry I was late to the story, but loved it!!! The angst was relatively short-lived and always solved, the characters were wonderful and deep, the sex was great, and the power shared between Hermione and Lucius was wonderful.

So, on to more of your stories!

Thanks so much for sharing.

Morgana

just so you know, i am british and i ADORE pancakes- we DO eat pancakes and whoever told you that we didn't is an idiot.
(we even have a 'pancake tuesday' once a year- dya before lent- its a christian thing, but everyone does it anyway, no matter what religion.)

I feel so inadequate in my reviews. How do I tell you how your stories have made me feel? How entranced I was by them, how earthy and real they felt? All my thoughts get jumbled and sound pretentious to my own ears. They sound like bolstered praise, or falsely prettied words. But I mean them. I was completely enthralled by this story. I love how they clash so horribly most of the time. I love how you present, without lecturing or oversimplifying, that marriage is hard. Even true love and all that. Even fairytale romances take work if you care enoough about them to want them to continue to succeed. You could be a marriage councilor love. You assemble words like very few others. And in such a unique way that I've never read anything that even came close to your particular style. Thank you, once more, for you brilliant prose. I live in Florida, and your stories are close to the only thing that kept me from having cabin fever after 4-5 days of constant driving rains. I kept expecting to see animals gathering together in twos. Thank you for the great escape.

~Mia

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What an interesting beginning! I do hope that they are able to escape though as naughtiness between my two favourite characters is always a bit more attractive of a prospect when they are both clean and free. LOL!

I loved every word you spun in this web of mystery. I spent many a night after work (from midnight on) reading this sometimes even falling asleep at the computer. I was constantly in awe of your superb characterisations. I laughed and cried whilst reading this. going to look at another of your stories to read now...

I really enjoyed this story. You have a great sense of humor and it came through in your writing.

Very interesting opening - looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

I praticularly like the vibe between Lucius and Hermione - very well written uneasy partnership.

Laughed at the addition of the spots - nice balance between humor and the dreary prison setting. Still snickering at the brief mental image of Lucius being turned off later by his own handiwork.

This is developing into a nicely complex story - I like watching the budding realtionship between Hermione and Lucius while waiting for the mystery of their incarceration together to unfold.