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person Janeplay
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU?!!! I was pining for some LH smut and you stopped it! Oh, what a plot you must have lined up! More please. I love it!
person jw
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 15-16 - ?????? not legally married??? I sure hope she figures out the truth fast! And WHAT dates reported in the Daily Prophet? Snape wouldn't pass such gossipy tripe to Lucius, and he's the only way Lucius could get the newspaper. Eeps!
person Tahkri
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Okay, first, I love this story. I'm in love with all the in depth Lucius/Severus stories. This is really only the 2nd really really good Lucius story I've read. Second, I didn't think two people in a cell for more than 3 chapters could be interesting but you've proven me wrong. God, they're both so stubborn too. I feel kind of sad. I hope there is a happy or at least partly happy chapter in the near future. Again, I really like this story. I have an FF acount but havn't gotten round to making one here if you want to email me. Cheers! Update soon!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Hermione spends her every waking hour getting Lucius out of Azkaban, and he still thinks she doesn't really want him. Silly boy. What's it going to take for him to spring into action? Something nasty relating to the mystery conspirators, I suspect.

I feel Snape's irritation at having to mediate - relationship counselling really isn't his thing, is it?

I'm on tenterhooks waiting to see what Lucius thinks of Hermione's pregnancy still.
person angelbaby
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK I know all your stories have happy endings but AHHHHHHHH! Stubin stupid fools, open your mouths and say what you feel. Please let them get it together soon. By the way I just read The Wedding and it was fab, well done. Your a great writer I love your stuff. Kisses.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know whether to cry or through something...how can lucius be so thickheaded. Need that firewhisky I think.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imagine my delight to coming back from vacation to several new chapters added to my fave fic! Not enough chappies, however since there's still no Lucius-Hermine smut. Get on with it, EBQ!
person Claudia
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First I have to say, I USUALLY dislike stories in which Hermione gets pregnant by accident - she is the brightest witch of them all so she should manage that small item, too !
In this story however there is a good explanation for it, and I want to thank you for writing it that way !
Second - I can not wait to find out who are the bad guys in this story...you are keeping me guessing all the time..
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is no fool like an old fool they say, and Lucius is a living proof to that!!!! Man, he is so stupid I am not sure I wan't Hermione back with him, not sure he deserves her or the baby. Yes, I know he has a lot of things to come to terms with, but with his own betrayal towards Hermione don't you dare letting her forgive him that easily!!! If he is stupid enough, and shortminded enough, to belive that she have had a rain of lovers while he was left in prison, there is no reason for her to let him back into her life easily. He has a lesson to learn, and from what we know of that pureblooded bastard, the lesson has to hurt tremendlessly for it to stick. Please make Hermione strong enough to stand tall and say that there is no way he will ever be part of her, and her childs, life. That there is no reason for her to belive that, come the oppertunity, he will not betray her just the same way once more. I wan't my happy ending, but I hate it when Hermione is betrayed so evilly (no matter what "noble" reason) and then like a week fool, forgive all the pain and hurt after a few sweet words. She is strong enough to demand a love that is as true, faithful, honest etc etc, as she her self is willing to give. Most things in life have come easy to Mr. Malfoy, money of conections getting him out of most kinds of trouble, its about time he realise that sometimes your actions and words migth be unforgivable, and that the trust he destroys can not be bougth back by money or sweet words. Oh my God how mad I am at him at the moment:-) Update again soon!!!!!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.