AFF Fiction Portal
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please upate soon! I can't wait, seriously, to read the next chapter. I hope you update as soon as possible. I'm sitting at the edge of my chair, bitting my nails off, I CAN'T, CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. What happened to Hermione and the baby? Are you going to talk abou them in the next chapter? I hope you do. Great Job. I can't believe Lucius was wasting himself, I'm glad, for once, what Snape did for him. I'm glad he finally stood up for himself, and decided that enough is enough and look for Hermione. Great job once again.

Lady Serpentina
person Extraho
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Luc is going to get the shock of his life when a pregnant hermione opens the door. *Rubbs palms evilly* she was pregnant right?
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo go Lucius! Fight for your woman! Of course Hermione just punch Lucius out when she first sees him. Pregnacy hormones. ANd I hope she tells Lucius about his son or daughter. Please add more.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I LOVED what you did to Lucius, he deserved every seccond of it! Arse, he has probably not hurt half as much as Hermione anyway, she has probably been entertained with his rambling with pureblood witches spread all over the Daily Prophet. I know he will be in for a shock when he finds that she is pregnant, by now she won't be able to hide it, but I sure whish she will not take him back easily. He betrayed her so deeply, she should be wary to allow him back into her life, no matter how much paperwork he has filed at the Ministry. Don't get me wrong, I love your story, but I am always in for quid pro pro, he dismissed her like she was nothing (I don't care if he had feelings for her, he did betray her), and she should be allowed to deliver some of that hurt and betrayal rigth back to him. I do so look forward for your next chapter, but promise not to make it easy for him. I do not want a meak Hermione who are more or less forced back to Malfoy Manor because Lucius have decided that there is where she belongs, I want a Hermione who figths back and force him to see the consequences of his actions and to really have to work for her forgiveness. But, most of all; UPDATE SOON!!!!
person Genevi
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I think the surprise will be...Big!! I await the next chapter impatiently!!
person Citten
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay first off great chapter. second hate the timing! so would you before you just jump right into where he is on her doorstep to back track and let us know what poor hermione has been going through! PLEASE!!!! poor lucius boy is he in for a HUGE sock! well only thing left to say is UPDATE SOON, REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I am glad that Lucius is going to get Hermione back. If I'm not mistaken she thought she was pregnant, right. I wonder what he will say about that, if she was in fact with child. She would have had it by now. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person drlincu
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you redeemed yourself! I look forward to the next chapter very very very soon.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I think what Snape did to Lucius was bad , I can't wait to see what Hermione does to him. I bet she is going to be a real "witch" to him. I wonder what Lucius will say when he sees That Hermione is sporting a big belly. I can't wait for your next chapter.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had a lot to catch up on. RL keeps foiling my plans to blissfully slip into a fantasy world. Stupid real life. Well I was shocked to find out that they are not really married and that she is carring the next Malfoy heir. Someone needs to nudge these two back into each others arms before it's too late. I can't wait to find out what happens next :)