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person because
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Lucius run to her you fool. Great chappie LaBib (promise no to throw stuff at you). Keep 'em coming.
person wildrose
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius (and Severus) how sad it is when we use any means to anhiliate our senses. Drugs, alchool, self denial, poor thing, he must really be in a bad state. Rather needless, to say I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Hugs

Ophelia

person mary
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Lucius is going to be shocked to see her pregnant! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person gowvan
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice...I'm really enjoying this story of yours.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. My money is on Hermione *not* just falling back into his arms. Lucius, you got some 'splainin' to do...
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so close and yet so far. now i simply cannot
wait for the next chapter. i'm sitting here,
imagining the shock on his face. or something
similar.

on a side note, thank you so kindly for checking
out one of my own fics. i was both surprised and
pleased to see that i had a new review on Bound
in Leather and even more so when i saw that it
was you who left it. thank you for all the kind
words and even for the little bitty critques you
left me. i will admit that i wasn't on one of my
'lusting after Lucius' phases when i wrote that,
so.... yeah. i think you understand.

honestly. i look forward to more of this wonderful
story.

~blessings~

*an embarrassed and pleased*
ldf
person Morgana
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want twins that is my wish and because it is a first pregnancy and becuase she will no doubt have been through the wringer as well in my expert opinion when she lets dear Luci haveit, and we all know she will, she most likely will go into premature labor (if you're wondering what my expertise is it happens to be a Bachelor's in nursing and a RN). That being the case I want to see dear Luci go into shock and then get it into his Pureblooded head that his children need him get them to St. Mungo's and start ordering EVERYONE to save HIS Family thus returning to the rich pureblodded bastard we all know and lust after. but that is only my wish and it can be taken or ignored as our magnificent author chooses.
person Shetan
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the last chapter between Lucius and Snape - serve him right..
It is certainly a wonderful story.
Please update soon
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter immensely! Lucius deserved what he got, but at least he got himself straightened out! And no way is Hermione just going to take him back like nothing ever happened.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, but not good enough! How about some angry sex smut? That's always hot! (As you can tell, I'm not very good at dealing with angst)