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schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I for one am glad that Severus stepped in and gave Lucius that potion. He would have died if it didn't happen and I don't think I would have liked Lucius to die or that all of a sudden he was better without any explanation. I really liked this chapter, now I can;t wait for Hermione's reaction when her husband shows up at her door. I hope she kicks the crap out of him for trying to get out of the marriage. :)
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that was a perfect punishment for Lucius' pigheadedness. Besides friends don't let friends do stupid things, so I am glad Snape is the way he is. We may see a tinsy-winsey humbler Lucius at Hermione's door, but thats about it. As for Hermione's response, I don't know, personally I would be resolute in refusing the request at first. But thats just me.
person DB1
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@17 yay they getting back together?? i don't imagine that hermione will make it easy for him to just walk back into her life! awesome chapter update soon

*DB*
person firewall
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius deserved every second of his painful, embarassing expulsion. Hopefully he has learned his lesson although I am quite sure it is not the end of his pain. hahahaha Go Hermione.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love that lucius had to hurt a bit for trying to deny his feelings for hermione. and, no, i doubt she'll be very happy to see him again, as coldly as he dismissed her. especially being pregnant. i do believe, however, that her pregnancy is going to force him to woo her back, quickly! can't wait for the next update!!
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Lord, poor Lucius! I could feel that! The effects of that potion were rendered in cruel (but brilliant) detail.

Yay for Snape! I like his uniquely Slytherin solution to his friend's wrongheaded behaviour. And I like that social visits aren't even at the bottom of his to-do list - that's so characteristic!

I love it. He's on his way to see Hermione, complete with cape and cane. Fancy that turning up at your door...(yes, I do).

Hooray - have we navigated a clear path through the worst of the angst now, or is there more to come?
person Korrigan
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amen about time Lucius got his head out of his arse!can't wait for the next chap!
person B
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope hermione won't leave him suffer for too long, and when will the voices re-emerge from their evil break?

excellent as always
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... damn! I hate it when I get intop one of my (NO TIME TO READ or WRITE) stages... I have missed four chapters! That was... Oh, man! Well, One good thing came out of my missing the updates... By the time I get to it thay are getting close to being reconciled. YEA for that... Although, I must say I am totally afraid now of what will happen when he comes face to face with not only his wife, but his new child. (Bastard will deserve every bit of the brow beating I know he's gonna get!

Okay, so I'm all caught up... Now, will you hurry and update so I can read even more????

Affectionately your devoted fan, Shiloh