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@18...lol i didn't think she would make it easy for him. glad they are together though. update soon.

*DB*

Whoo Awesome chapter. Way to go Hermione, put Lucius in his place. Please add more to this story. I want to see Lucius go after those two guys for what they did to his wife and what they could do now that Hermione is pregnant with his unborn child. Please add more soon.

I like the fact that Hermione is holding her own. But I don't think I like your Harry. And Lucius? Boy, he needs some humility.

Loosie Malfie? Lol. I had lots of fun reading this chapter. It was trully delicious, well to read that is. I liked the way you made Lucius in this chapter, he was Lucius but at the sametime he is the man who has feelings for the petie witch, as much as he denies it. Great chapter. I can't wait to read chapter 19. As for Hermione -I give her a bloody ten. She was awesome. Just how I imagine her to be in this chapter. Great self-contaiment. She was so casual, but she was probably all jell in the inside, like our favorite dark wizard. I'm glad Lucius's looking foward towards this baby's incoming birth. What I really loved about this chapter was the moment Lucius touched his soon-to-be wife's round stomach. Imagine twins?! :) Great job once again. Update soon

Claudia

Aha, good to have them together again, at least in a 'for the sake of the baby' way.

Hermione should have given him that knotty-hair hex though - that would have been hilarious, though perhaps he's suffered enough after Snape's efforts with the poisons!

I liked the way he reacted to the news of Hermione's pregnancy - all kinds of complex and conflicting emotions. Especially liked the bit about him having to make sure none of her goodness and sweetness infected the baby's temperament. LOL. How Slytherin.

Lovely work; now I want to see how they make the difficult journey back to the footing they had in Azkaban. Oh, and defeating the baddies, of course.

LaBibliographe, this is just incredible! I haven't read such a high calibre of fanfiction for a long time and I cannot tell you how impressed I am- an unusual premise, wonderful characterisation, well thought-out plot AND delicious smut (which made me wish my boyfriend was here, as a matter of fact!)
Loved the "Purge" chapter- someone should show Lucius the 2cold turkey" scene from Trainspotting with the baby crawling on the ceiling...
How I wish the happy couple would just TALK to each other and get it all out in the open- but what kind of drama would that be?
All the best,
Amy

Wonderful chapter of life after the scales have fallen from romantically occluded eyes. I really enjoyed Hermione's acceptance of Lucius' inner Slytherin while plotting his re-training. I love your story and want to thank you for sharing it with us.

Will we see Draco in the near future and is Lucius underestimating the reaction to a Half-blood Malfoy from his the Purebloods?

Lucius living in a Muggle house seems punishment enough. LOL. Spendid chapter as always!

of course it was brilliant, my dear.
positively brilliant. of course you
know i can't wait for more. please
don't keep us waiting for very long.

~blessings~
ldf

Thank God you didn't have him go all soppy!! What would have been the fun in that? So many writers rush the character development or are OOC from the beginning so I'm happy to see you're not. Husbands do take time to train after all. LOL Also, I really liked how you had Lucius able to tell the child is his. Great idea!