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person Amy
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Toaster is correct, fear not!
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I am glad that they are starting to realize that they need each other. I do hope that once their baby is born that she will agree to move to Malfoy Manor. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person Morgana
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent as usual.Hermione turning dear Lucius into a house boy how perfect. as per Harry you know he is going to go off teh deep end but it is the long standing feud between the Weasley's and teh Malfoy's that I am interested in. You know Molly and Arthur think of her as thier own. hmmm till next time.
person Genevi
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I guess that if Lucius will not grovel at Hermione feets that there is no chance in hell also that he babysat some Weasley's babies twins... Oh! Well... I imagine that the obvious confrontation with a fuming Harry will have to do!! And what to say when Draco will discover that Hermione is his mother-in-law!! Hope to see another chapter soon, this story is simply delectable!!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 - Well. I like that they finally have gotten bqack together, and of course, Hermione should have him grovel for a while... But It bothers me that they are both too damn stubborn!! (In a good way, of course)

Okay, so now I wait anxiously for more... Anytime now would be acceptable... :-)

Shiloh
person Korrigan
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's going great keep it up!oh naughty Lucius,I love the way Hermione didn't just give in to him or take him back right away,it's going to be so funny when he help's her out with the pregant/baby stuff oh I can see it now (nappies Lucius nappies!)
person Citten
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so terrible due i was dying for a chapter! :) well i do love that lucius will stay with her- and i loved his reaction! ;) serves him right i'd say. well this will be so much fun to watch (oops read) as it unfolds. do say that you have another chapter coming soon! lucius is just so stuborn! yes i do agree with you that hermione is just as cunning as any slytherin, this will be fun! :)
person lizziek
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius.... impotent.... I'm sorry, that does not compute. I must be coming down with something. Moving on.

Soooo... Severus dosed him and now he's off the junk for good. Excellent. Lovely to see Snape in action, as always. Nasty bit of purging Our Lucius went through, too. It's very good to know that those fascinating manacles at Hogwarts are getting some use. It may not be the use I had in mind, but use just the same.

And then we had the reunion - a bit frosty, but if he's moving in then I'm sure we'll get somewhere in short order. Mr. High Lord of Malfoy Manor sharing a cottage with Ms. Pregnantly Hormonal Hermione, should be good fun. He'll have to do something about sharing the dining room table - he's not going to put up his papers every night. I'm interested in this housekeeper with the hypnotically bad clothing. I have a feeling she won't be taking any guff from Lucius.

I think Hermione's plans are sensible and very Hermione-ish but I do hope she doesn't tame him too much. After all, what fun would Lucius be if he turned into Alan Alda? (Answer: nice guy, but... er...no) Still some torture in the Muggle world will do him some good. She should send him to the grocery store for some perfectly disgusting craving she has. Not only would the store freak him out, his distaste at preparing something preggy-awful would be delicious.

Two more fun chapters and looking forward to more. You really do give great Lucius/Hermione.

schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And? What next? Please update soon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, boy! I am most definitely looking forward to the war ahead! Continue the great work.