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I'm not sure I would be able to negotiate for more than five seconds with a seductively-disrobing Lucius. Hermione stood up very well there!

As always, there's a lavishly sensual quality to your smut that sets it way above the ordinary - I love the way you involve all the senses, building it up to a gourmet treat. It's earthy but never crude; simply divine.

It's great to see them together again, though I can imagine all kinds of entertaining contretemps to come. And perhaps some suspense c/o the baddies - is this overcoming your fear of it?

Oh, and a toaster's a toaster ;-).

Another wonderful chapter and long too. We call it a toaster in England too; we don't have any other words for it. I think it is great though that you are trying to use the English terms for a story set in England. It really grates on my nerves when stories use purely American terms, such as fall, instead of autumn and liquor, instead of alcohol etc. This is the best Lucius/Hermione story I have come across.

enjoyed this chapter a lot. Great job!

Lady Serp.

Well written! I am so glad to see another chapter on this! It made my day... I am stuck up here at work (I worked all night) and the stupid payday inservice starts at 8:20 am, so it isn't worth my going home. So, I'm sitting in my hubby's office, reading through some of the fanfictions I love so well while I wait for time for the meeting...

I loved Hermione showing him around. I love that she's trying to stay angry with him, while at the same time, lusting like crazy over his body! I like his willingness to do whatever he can to help her. (That's a point for Lucius) I've seen so many guys that when they fuck up... and they know they fucked up... the still want to continue being the jackasses they were to start...

I am anxious for the nexet chapter... Is it up yet? :-(

Shiloh

@19. yay they are together. loved the chapter update soon,

*DB*

Holy Goddess! You are certainly having Hermione put Lucius in his place. In a way Lucius does deserve it,for what he put Hermione through. Go Hermione! But yay, you got Hermione and Lucius together finally. Please add more! Lucius needs to finally admit that he loves Her mione or at least prove it to Hermione and himself. Please add more soon.

I like it. Please update soon.

Well, as for Harry it would probably be good for him to be an 'ass' in general for the first bit of a chap. and then have him inadvertently see a moment where Lucius get unguardedly sweet and protective of his 'tidbit.' Probably w/o him knowing that Harry is an observer, or anyone else for that matter.

I think your writing of this last chapter was spot on. I mean, you've really made me feel involved with the characters and their personalities have become very well established for me as the reader. So, I suppose my only request is that you continue this wonderful story.

well harry is yours to control in this story-regardless of how he is written or protrays in the movies. but remember he maybe somewhat hot-tempered at times in the end he does learn to accept things. as for the rest well it is about time! ;) well i do look forward to how lucius will iron things out even it takes awhile. do update soon now if you please!

Wow, Hermione