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I'm really enjoying the story uopdate soon and often! In response to how Harry would react, I was wondering if maybe the two villians might fan the flames a bit? Something like trying to incite Harry's hot headedness and get him to do some of their dirty work for them. With him already doing the whole passive aggressive thing they would probably just need a few well placed and subtle comments to the right gossipy types.

Awesome job! Loved this chapter! Please add more!

Oh, I am eager to see this!!! haha. Hrm... so does Hermione still love him? Or rather, is she still in love, even though he deserted her for so long? And why in the hell does she want to roam in his social circles!!!? LOL Is she mad?!

I think Harry should stay a side character. Even if he is angry. Or his anger could piss off his wife, and he ends up having to deal with it.

I can't wait to see what happens when these two realize their hearts are already involved.

I just read your entire story in a matter of hours.
I LOVED IT. The characters are very much in character, the plot is advancing at a nice rate, and the plot itself it interesting/new.

Please update soon!!
Julia

I am so glad you updated! I am taking my crystal ball out:

I think Harry would not be happy, and will suspect Lucius of seducing Hermione. He still thinks of Hermione as an innocent friend. That is why he could not see her having sex with Lucius, or being pregnant by him. Harry will be in denial and not accept that Hermione loves Lucius.

For starters Harry probably accuses Lucius of seducing Hermione to get her to help free him, only going back to her because of the baby aka Malfoy heir. It will take a lot to convince him that it

i loved it.
Will there be an additional twists to the plot, or is it going to settle down/end soon?
not that i want it to! i'm just curious.

I must thank you for the lovely review you left for Come and Play. I will admit that I have been slightly addicted to Prisoners of Love since you posted it, and did a little happy dance when I saw that you had updated. I find your perfectionism and attention to detail admirable, my editor would love you as I happen to be a burr in her saddle more often than not. I love to tell the tale, but do not pay the kind of attention I should to grammer and such, luckily for me she does and sends back my manuscripts looking as though someone were in fact murdered with pages in hands. She likes her red pens(*smirks*) Fortunately in my working world, nothing gets printed with errors, but alas, the poor readers of my fan fics get to see just how dependant upon Word I am to edit things...any how, thank you again, and please, keep up the good work, I can not wait to read about the birth, I get the feeling when Draco came along, he was probably somewhere else....would love to see him faced with a wife in labor LOL

Well I'm happy that Lucius can play hide the wand again. I think we all missed that game when they were apart. I know I have.
As for Harry, maybe you could play him as a friend that is a little too over protective. Maybe he is realizing that he has always loved Hermione, now that he can't have her? Yes, he is married to Ginny and loves his wife. Maybe he just always hoped Hermione wouldn't find a wizard to love so he would be the only wizard in her life. Ok, ok thats all I have to say. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I can totally picture Hermione as the woman that would want a sex toy as she slowly opened herself back up to Lucius! Wow. Another great chapter. :) More soon, please?