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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, I'm not real big on reviewing, I know author's love it; and yet I don't often do it. Anyway, this si the second of your stories that I have read and I love them both! Matter of fact you have fast become one of favorit author's. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Sarah
Sarah
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations! This chapter has won runner-up for "Best First Time" in the Smutastic Awards on LiveJournal! Please feel free to come collect your banner at http:// community dot livejournal dot com / smutastic award/24552 dot html and post with your story. Congratulations again!
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations! This chapter has won "Mod's Choice" in the Smutastic Awards on LiveJournal! Please feel free to come collect your banner at http : // community dot livejournal dot com / smutastic award/24552 dot html and post with your story. Congratulations again!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story also! I'm starting to honestly get hooked on the Lucius and Hermione pairings. I like how you incorporated Draco in there as well and Snape (bahaha and his lovely body paint). I really like the way you write and the way you reply to the different reviewers comments on your story. 10 on 10, wonderful story!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, it took me took weeks to read this, but the whole thing was amazing!
i especially loved the whole paint scenes! but i loved the ending! all the time i read stories with shitty endings but that was just .....WOW! be cool of there was a sequel! *kisses*
i especially loved the whole paint scenes! but i loved the ending! all the time i read stories with shitty endings but that was just .....WOW! be cool of there was a sequel! *kisses*
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure I have yet to review your story on here!
I would like to say that you are awesome! Your review turnout is something crazy! Alright, onto the review...
This is a nice story, but I think I was... well not disappointed really, cause everything happened nicely and all... I think most of my distaste for this story has to do with personal preference...
The only thing that is glaringly disappointing, and was so since the first time I read that chapter, was how their sexual relationship grew in the cell. They had their first time together, and we read about all the things that Hermione wants to try and how she has a creative mind.... Im referring to "For the following two weeks, .... behaved like normal newlyweds..." ya da ya da. You say that they have delighted in eachother and obviously have sex a lot.
Now, personal preference would have me want to read those events, as I see them as sort of the most important and nothing to be graced over in three paragraphs. All those amazing things she wants to try and experience should be shown, not all of them, but a lot of them... That would build on their relationship, and their trust in eachother... That's just me... And I really wish the ending was a little more... big.
Alright, that's all I got! :)
I would like to say that you are awesome! Your review turnout is something crazy! Alright, onto the review...
This is a nice story, but I think I was... well not disappointed really, cause everything happened nicely and all... I think most of my distaste for this story has to do with personal preference...
The only thing that is glaringly disappointing, and was so since the first time I read that chapter, was how their sexual relationship grew in the cell. They had their first time together, and we read about all the things that Hermione wants to try and how she has a creative mind.... Im referring to "For the following two weeks, .... behaved like normal newlyweds..." ya da ya da. You say that they have delighted in eachother and obviously have sex a lot.
Now, personal preference would have me want to read those events, as I see them as sort of the most important and nothing to be graced over in three paragraphs. All those amazing things she wants to try and experience should be shown, not all of them, but a lot of them... That would build on their relationship, and their trust in eachother... That's just me... And I really wish the ending was a little more... big.
Alright, that's all I got! :)
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations. Chapter 10 of 'Prisoners of Love - A Mystery' has been nominated for 'Best First Time' at the Smutastic Awards! To accept this nomination, please reply to us at smutasticawards at yahoo dot com by October 14th.
Again, congratulations!
Dynonugget, Smutastic Awards Moderator
Again, congratulations!
Dynonugget, Smutastic Awards Moderator
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius looked thoughtful,
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He went back to gazing at his orb and his surveillance of the prison
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He went back to gazing at his orb and his surveillance of the prison