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What? No pink apron? But Lucius would look so yummy, especially if he wasn

Another great chapter.

I'm probably not the first to say it but the scene with the toaster was just hilarious!! I can just imagine what can happen if he tried to microwaved something anything like say a cup of tea with the spoon in it!! I look forward to read the confrontation between Lucius and Harry and maybe a little familly reunion between Hermione and Draco or see the reaction of Narcissia, whatever it is, when she learn of the wedding and/or the child!! Hope to see more soon!!!

Still excellent. I love how he ruined the toaster, it was funny. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.

Lucius trying to use a toaster...lol That was hilarious. And the small, cute pancakes is so Lucius. The whole kitchen scene made their relationship seem so real, even though there are so many barriers to cross for them.

One sentenced did sound a bit awkward to me. "Lucius was born with a silver spoon in his mouth, but he had his full allotment of brains." I think it would be better as "Lucius may have been born with a silver spoon in his mouth, but ..." I think it sounded weird because you started with the past tense, but then your dependent sentence tense changes. I am horrible at explaining grammar with technical terms, so I hope you understand what I am trying to say. LOL.

Sorry for my ignorance(sp?) but what is a "tryo"?
Thanks for the great way to spend time when I should be grading papers!

but of course you would want lucius for your busboy (and face it if you didnt then there is something very wrong.) ;) well i so do want to read more of what dear hermoione will do to 'poor' lucius. hey question i dont know what you have planned but i would love to see lucius take hermoione on a shopping spree-and buy her all kinds of cloths(especally maternaty stuff-both wizard and muggle)it would be lots of fun! also i would love to see hermione do the womanly touch to lucius' manor home and do just that make it home to both of them and the baby too-besides she will be moving in after the baby i would want to make it......well perfect. :) just something i would like to see, but as always it is your story and up to you! hope to read more and SOON!!

loved the chapter looking forward to the next update

who wouldn't have him for a houseboy? mmm, Lucius in just an apron wandering round the house at my beck and call ...

sorry, drifted away there! another fantastic chapter and I would love to know where that hand is heading! I know, I'm a sucker for the smut! woah, that sounded weird!

post more soon please!

I like it. Please update soon.