rate_review Reviews

It was great to come home to several chapters of this terrific story. Lucius is no longer impotent - YAY! Lovely smut and pancakes too - so cute. I can't see him in pink frills, so it's just as well that only lasted a second. I appreciate the thought but having tried it as a kid, I don't think Lucius should use dishwashing liquid in the soon-to-be-transfigured bath. Look at what it did to his beautiful hands - the horror!

But where, oh where, are our evil-doers? Busily plotting something awful for the happy couple, no doubt. I look forward to their return, along with visits from Hermione's friends. I can't wait for them to get a look at her new houseboy/sex toy, now that he's ensconsed in her tiny little house. Draco's reaction to his father's new digs will also be pretty entertaining. You do such a nice set-up, in between those fabulous sex scenes.

Just a thought - a toaster oven might be a good idea for Lucius' further adventures in breakfast bread. The English like it toasted on one side only, so the broil or top-brown setting is a morning lifesaver, Chez Pluto (Mr. Pluto is English).

another pair of wonderful chapters, my dear.

again, i can't wait for more.

yes, short and sweet. i wish i was capable of long,
in depth reviews. but, believe it or not, i
flounder trying to find the right things to say. i
do so love this story. the intrigue is... intriguing.
Lucius and Hermione mesh well while still being true
to character. i'm looking forward to Harry's reaction
to Lucius's return. and the birth of the baby. and
Lucius hexing the `nads off the two who set them up.
and Hermione doing the same a few more times.

oh yes, and i'm looking forward to more smut. did i
mention that?

~blessings~
ldf

Well, as an American, a Californian who eats pancakes, I just have to say..."dude." Great story! LOL*

*happy sigh* Plotlessness is never an issue with me, I assure you. Extremely well-written plotlessness, actually. I loved it! :)

As much as I love your plot it's great to have some smut! and a whole chapter as well - mmm, lucius!

Already looking forward to more

Well, I'd argue that reconnection in the bedroom is highly germane to the plot (which can also be translated as 'I love your smut').

That was swoony. Lucius is a dream lover, isn't he? I really can't fault his technique. 'Twin grey pools of sin' - lovely.

Stick an intense sex scene into the action any time you like, La Bib! xx

@21. hot chapter, update soon. at least she doesn't want to torture him like he did for her.

*DB*

hey i thaught you said there would be shopping? unless you ment a shopping search for 'release' that is. oh well never knock a gift right? well sex with these two is always fun and so no complants. until next chapter right, i will get the 'clothes' shopping-right? :)

Thanks for the vocab lesson. Reading your work is a pleasure.