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schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo, the plot thickens.

i do hope that those two get their
just desserts when the time comes.

poor Hermione. feeling put out in her
own home. but i have every faith that
you'll rectify that soon enough.

looking forward to more, darling.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person DeeDee
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If Lucius is going to the magical world and coming to Hermione
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Should I feel guilty that I, like Hermione, hadn't considered the ramifications of limited house space when Lucius moved in, and only thought of the sex? I need to get me a man.

Anyways, looks like we can rule out Harry and Ron (hey, I've read plenty of badfic, it could happen), plus Draco, since he wouldn't call his father "Malfoy." I wonder if these co-conspirators are anyone we know.

Can't wait for the next chapter, and good luck rewriting as you go! Make sure any changes you make don't clash with earlier chapters, nitpickers WILL find it! I've done it myself, so good luck!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait for the meeting with the senior Grangers if it's going to make Lucius reconsider his limp dick - LOL!

I love his fastidious fashion sense, and his comment about that shade of yellow being used for crime scenes made me snort. No more trips to Ye Olde Thrift Shoppe for Hermione then.

Oh dear, though, dastardly plotting...it isn't going to be all cocktails and baby-naming ahead. Shiver.
person blue artemis
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know they need to find a way to live together, but except for the sex part, I kind of want to hit both of them over the head with a cast iron skillet.

And those villains sound horrible. I want to laugh at them as much as I want to know what exactly they want. Good chapter!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person DB1
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@22. cool chapter, update soon

*DB*
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I enjoyed it, a lot. It's so boring today that your chapter saved my night. Thanks
Update soon

W('.')W

Lady Serpentina
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job girl. Please add more. Maybe in the nest chapter, since wizarding pregnacies are spead up more then muggles, why not have Lucius and Hermione find out the sex of their child so they can choose baby names? Just a suggestion. ANy way please add more soon.