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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i particularly love the back story. a little
history into what now makes the characters
tick is some of the best stuff, in my opinion.
i've always hated when authors write about what's
happened before, but they only give hints and
never go into deep detail. that's always made me a
bit on the batty side.
i look forward to the meeting with her parents. i
suspect they'll be even less willing to forgive his
actions than Hermione was.
there's so much work to be done before the two of them
can have a truly healthy relationship. i see both of
them as being so very flawed. Hermione hides it in her
intelligence and Lucius uses his control to batter the
image aside.
it will be most interesting to see how the two of them
resolve this issue they have. and i'm sure you'll get to
it eventually.
again, i'm looking forward to more!
*hugs*
~blessings~
ldf
history into what now makes the characters
tick is some of the best stuff, in my opinion.
i've always hated when authors write about what's
happened before, but they only give hints and
never go into deep detail. that's always made me a
bit on the batty side.
i look forward to the meeting with her parents. i
suspect they'll be even less willing to forgive his
actions than Hermione was.
there's so much work to be done before the two of them
can have a truly healthy relationship. i see both of
them as being so very flawed. Hermione hides it in her
intelligence and Lucius uses his control to batter the
image aside.
it will be most interesting to see how the two of them
resolve this issue they have. and i'm sure you'll get to
it eventually.
again, i'm looking forward to more!
*hugs*
~blessings~
ldf
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one to see what happens at her parent's house. Please update again soon.
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Engaging as usual. I like the backstory from Lucius, he's not exactly a very forthcoming character and its always nice to see him open up a bit. I continue to have this, most likely deluded, belief that everyone, no matter their past, is able to reform....even my fictional characters whom I seem to develop very strong attatchements too LOL....keep it up...I so love reading about poor Lucius struggling to gain the upper hand and failing so adorably.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter my dear, as usual!
I have to say, I don
I have to say, I don
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just reading Lucius' comments about Hermione's fashion sense reminded me of that new show of Tim Gunn's on Bravo about how he helps women who need to change their fashion style. I can so see Lucius in that role. LOL.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intresting you know I admit for a bit I thought Ron would be a bad guy because he wasent mentioned in the earlier chapters only Harry was reunited with her not Ron too.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well sweetheart no worries about the miscommunication because really i always (well almost) love what you write. besides i never know when it might just sneak in the story later. ;) so good chapter poor hermione and poor lucius they really do have a lot of adjust to do for each other. well i wonder what those terrible villans have in store for our couple well i will just have to wait and see, wont i? see you next update (well you know what i mean.)
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ould you give us a hint to which house the villians were in. Are they two guys, or guy & girl . Or two girls ?
If I was married to Lucius, he would never make it out of the bedroom, and if he did, he would never leave the house, without me by his side.
If I was married to Lucius, he would never make it out of the bedroom, and if he did, he would never leave the house, without me by his side.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool!! Please, please give another hint or two as to the conspirators!! Is it Draco? (I don't think so, but your stories are so twisty that you never know!) AAAAARRRRRGGHHH! The suspense is killing me! (Well done!)