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I was very behind on this story. I have taken on a new project that has taken away all of my free time. I don't have time to read or write at the moment. I was able to steal a few hours back today and catch up on my stories that I have been reading. It would figure that this chapter would end on a cliffy. My brain is a little frazzled, I'm having a hard me coming up with things to say. I am curious on how her parents are going to react to Lucius. Will they kill him for leaving their daughter? Or will they look at the fact that he came looking for her, without knowing about the baby first. Lucius still has a lot of personal issues to work on, but I am glad that he is very happy about becoming a father again. I wonder what Harry is up to and what is so important. I'm also curious if the villians followed him to Hermione's house and they now know where she lives and that Lucius is with her. Can't wait for more, hopefully I would be so far behind next time I have a chance to sit down and read again :)

I'm always sympathetic to Lucius, even in stories where he's a lot more evil than this one. He's too handsome to hate. I like having a bit more backstory, it helps put everything in perspective and it's good to know more about Lucius in this story. He has it in for Scrimgeour but I have a feeling he's not one of the mysterious plotters. Dinner Chez Granger should be interesting.

I hope everyone is ready for "Brotherhood" on Sunday, September 30! It's nice to see Jason Isaacs in such an extensive, modern role. He does a great Boston accent, which is not an easy thing to do.

Oh Geez! What the heck is on that paper that Harry brought? Ack!! Need...to...know...aghhh.

Ok, seriously now, a great chapter. Lucius is in over his head with Hermione - there is no way he'll come out on top, but humans are so notorious for being able to convince ourselves of anything when it suits our needs, and so Lucius is no different!

Looking forward to your next!

And can someone PLEASE tell me how to get notification when new chapters are added?

*sqeee* a new chapter! keep them coming!

It's finally occurred to Lucius that he's going to be a father again - better late than never. Ha ha at Hermione wanting to call the baby Gryffin; she knows how to wind him up.

They continue to prickle and tease at each other nicely (and Harry continues being a prat, of course). Are those teenage boys any part of the evil plot? I guess they might want to dissociate themselves from it after the way Lucius dealt with them. Nice one!

Fantastic and interesting, and the frequent updates are divine. Watch the cat hair in the computer though - I thought mine was on fire once and it turned out to be singed cat hair too close to the motor (or whatever the bit that gets hot is called...not an engineer at all).

I liked the "tickled black" modification from Lucius, that was amusing. It's good to see that Hermione and Lucius are trying to make the best of a situation. Even though it looks like Harry is here to ruin that attempt. I just love your stories, it always keeps me on the edge of my seat.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Hermione let Lucius obliviate the two boys, especially when he added another punishment with it. I hope that Harry will learn to back off and let Hermione work things out with Lucius. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please continue.

Ok Girl don't stay away to long. Come back here and update soon. Awesome chapter.

OK, I'll leave the skillets on the stove. I understand a little more about where Lucius is coming from. Don't get me wrong, I find Lucius seriously sexy, but the last chapter was frustrating. This one helps quite a bit, especially seeing what he was dealing with. I am enjoying your ideas on how to integrate Hermione into high society, and the fact that he has to play it entirely differently with her parents. That rage, though, that is a bit frightening.

What an interesting chapter! I do feel a bit for Lucius, but he's so delicious he's got a large amount of latitude.

Somewhat worried about his temper; seems he's still got some internal issues to work out. Maybe having the baby will tame him some.

Looking forward to that dinner with Hermione's parents! Can't wait to see how that turns out :)