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schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter. i love how the
two of them can so easily misunderstand the
intentions of the other and the sparks that
follow. one things for certain. there will
never be a lack of excitement in their
marriage.

looking forward to more.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Citten
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
but.. a... you... CANT JUST STOP IT THERE!!!!!! THAT IS JUST NOT FAIR!!! I WANT MORE NOW PLEASE!!!!! okay i just loved this chapter lucius has finally just had it hit him about the baby and i loved-loved it! well what news do we have now, just news, bad news, terriable news, or well you know. so how long before we get to know? i will be waiting. boy i hate not having internet at my house because i will have to wait tell monday-unless i can us my brother on sunday, well dont keep us waiting on my account.
person Queen Meabh
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, another wrinkle. A lovely pun to end a lovely chapter. Although really, Harry's been such an arse in this one. I'm not very sympathetic. If I had a friend who I *thought* was in a bad relationship I wouldn't confront both partners at once and I wouldn't be nearly so illogically angry about it. Lol.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. Continue the good work.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My goodness LaBib, you certainly paint a tantalizing picture of Lucius sound asleep in bed. Wow! I think I would just spend my whole morning just looking at him too, just like Hermione. Then he comes into the kitchen wearing nothing but a robe. Really you should stop. I
person ldf
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what an evil cliffie. i do hope you don't wait
too long to update now. i was so looking forward
to her parents' reactions to him at dinner. i
guess i shall just have to wait with baited breath.
no worries, i won't use fish. that would just be too
stinky.

it was a lovely chapter and i loved Lucius' line.
tickled black is just perfect. the other certainly
wouldn't suit him at all.

do try not to keep us waiting too long.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person doodle
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love wrikles!