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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Regarding Chapter One)
I find it highly amusing that Lucius remained so articulate in his speech; even though the dementors aren
I find it highly amusing that Lucius remained so articulate in his speech; even though the dementors aren
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoing this story very much!
your Lucius is perfect in my opinion! He is a gentleman ! A Slytering ,but truly a gentleman!
His fears are so real, so human! We all have felt that way at least once! Not really knowing how the other person feels or thinks about us, and not knowing exactly how we feel!!
Thank you for wrinting it
And i am sorry for my poor english!!I can read very well, it is the writing that gives me problems
your Lucius is perfect in my opinion! He is a gentleman ! A Slytering ,but truly a gentleman!
His fears are so real, so human! We all have felt that way at least once! Not really knowing how the other person feels or thinks about us, and not knowing exactly how we feel!!
Thank you for wrinting it
And i am sorry for my poor english!!I can read very well, it is the writing that gives me problems
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an enjoyable chapter. Thanks for the reprieve from the Lucius/Hermione tension, and it's nice to get some insight to Lucius's feelings a little bit. And the kitty cat writing was quippy and fun.
Now Lucius as some kind of lion, on the prowl...what a wonderful picture that makes! :)
Now Lucius as some kind of lion, on the prowl...what a wonderful picture that makes! :)
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully cute. A Muggle home life seems to be gradually getting on to Lucius.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i really enjoyed that. lucius really acted just like would and do with mayo, it was funny to read him do that! :) okay give us an update, soon!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the napping couple. That is very sweet. But Lucius only sees his wrongs, not what he is doing to Hermione. But they do seem to be meant for one another.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hilarious! Of course most of your chapters are. You write such funny dialog, as I
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story to date. I love the depth that you have put into the characters. It really shows you have really thought out how these characters really are at the core. I like how you push them both to their limits, it is wonderful to see the growth in them. I guess what I mean is they aren't 2d characters!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww